JJ's Muppets in Kingdom Hearts fanfic (revised and better)! Please read

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Ok well, after I did my first one, I got some feedback and suggestions that I thought I should look into, so a special thanks to RedPiggy and Gemini Draco for their little input. At first I thought I should leave out so many characters, but when rewriting it, I thought of ways to make it really work and I think this added story as well as just changing some of it. It starts out the same, but it changes (and I dare say get better) towards the end. So without further a do....

When Sora and company land in this unknown world, they're amazed to see nothing around, there isn't any Heartless or Pete nor Riku or Kairi.

Goofy: Well no sign of the Heartless here.

Sora: No Riku and no Kairi.

Donald: There isn't anything here.

(A shooting star goes by, catching Sora's attention.)

Sora: Something tells me...

(Sora goes running chasing the falling star)

Donald: (To Goofy) Where is he going?

Goofy: I don't know but I think we better follow him.

(Donald and Goofy go off chasing Sora)

(Fade out)

Fade back to the shooting star, where a green frog is looking up at the sky and sees the same shooting star Sora was chasing. The star disappears and Sora stops when he sees the unknown frog, Donald and Goofy catch up .

Donald: What's the big idea? Running off like that!

Sora: Sorry, something inside me told me to follow that star, I guess I though it would lead me to Riku and Kairi.

Goofy: But instead it lead us to this little green guy.

(Sora, Donald and Goofy look at him for a moment.)

Goofy: Gawish, poor little fella looks down.

(Sora, Donald and Goofy start walking toward the green frog.)

Sora: Hello there.

(Kermit turns around)

Kermit: oh, hi-ho

Sora: My name is Sora.


Donald: I'm Donald

Goofy: Goofy's the name.

Kermit: Oh I'm Kermit, Kermit the frog.

Sora: Is everything alright?

Kermit: I've had better days.

Goofy: Well what's the matter?

Kermit: Well, I was on my way to Hollywood and along the way I met others who wanted to come along.

Donald: What's wrong with that?

Kermit: We're going to miss the auditions. They really believed in me and I just let them down.

Sora: But you're still lucky after all you're with your friends.

Goofy: Yeah, at least you're not alone.

Kermit: But if I was alone, than it would just be me feeling miserable. Now I got a dog, a bear, a lady pig and a thing, whatever Gonzo is, he's a little like a turkey. Anyhow I lead them to the middle of nowhere and it's all my fault.


Sora: Trust me, it's better to be with your friends, no matter what, you're lucky as along as you have friends that stick with you.

Out of nowhere a loud scream is heard

Miss. Piggy: (Yelling in fear) KERMIE!

Kermit: Piggy?

(Gameplay: follow Kermit to "Roadside camp site")

Once there a bunch of Heartless, that look a lot like moving marionettes, are surrounding Gonzo, Fozzie Bear, Rowlf the dog and Miss. Piggy.

Donald: Heartless!

Sora: We'll take care of these guys, Kermit.

(Gameplay: Defeat the all the Heartless while protecting the Muppets)

After the Heartless are all defeated.

Kermit: Is everyone okay?

Piggy: We're fine Kermit, all thanks to you.

Donald: What about us? We fought the Heartless.

Piggy: Yes, but Kermit was the one that shown real leadership and was so very brave.

Kermit: Piggy.

Donald: Oh brother.

Fozzie Bear: That was scary.


Gonzo: What were those strange thing?

Sora: Those were the Heartless and trust us, their no good.

Kermit: Well thank goodness you and your friends were here Sora, otherwise who knows what would of happen to us.

Sora: No problem Kermit. Hey but by any chance have you seen anyone named Riku or Kairi.

Kermit: Hmmm, sorry, never heard of them. I wish I did know of them, but I don't.

Sora: Oh well, I've been looking for them, just thought maybe you knew something. Darn it.

Fozzie: Hey Kermit, you don't think Doc Hopper sent those things, do you?

Goofy: Doc Hopper?

Kermit: he's this rich man who owns a frog's legs restaurant.

Donald: Frog legs?

Fozzie: Yeah, he wants Kermit to be the mascot.

Kermit: He's been following me for awhile now, trying to get me to do his commericals for his "Doc Hopper's French Fried Frog Legs," makes me sick. I keep telling him no, but he won't ease up.

Rowlf: Hey guys.

Everyone turns to Rowlf.

Rowlf: Good news, I think I got the car running again.

Kermit: Gee Rowlf, that would be good news. Let's see.

Rowlf starts the car up, which also sets the radio on, Doc Hopper's voice is heard.

Doc Hopper: Attention, attention, this is Doc Hopper with a message for Kermit the frog, I'm through playing games frog, so I hired a specialist, he's name is Pete.

Sora, Donald, Goofy: Pete!

Fozzie: You guys know him.

Sora: Yeah and that explans why the Heartless are here too.

Doc Hopper: Hope you got the message, frog. Doc Hopper over and out.

Piggy: Kermie, what are we going to do?

Fozzie: This is bad, we have to hide you Kermit.

Sora: That's sounds like a good idea, we'll take care of them, you don't have to worry about anything Kermit.

Kermit looks up at Sora, than turns to Rowlf.

Kermit: Rowlf, where's the nearest town?

Rowlf: The closest thing ahead is that old Abandoned Ghost Town, many miles ahead.


Kermit: Fine, Fozzie.

Fozzie: Yes sir.

Kermit: Tell Doc Hopper to me there.

Everyone: (In surpise) What?

Gonzo: But Kermit, this guy is getting dangerous.

Rowlf: You could be killed.

Sora: Kermit, I said we can take care of this, don't worry.

Kermit: Thanks Sora, but I can't spend my life running from a bully and having other fight my battles, I have to face him. Fozzie find a way to tell him.

Fozzie: Yes sir

Gameplay: You (Sora) can right now go up to the Muppets and speak to them in text form. When you push the command talk to each Muppet, they each say something different. Here's what they'll say...

Kermit: Sora, I can't let this guy keep trying to bully me to get what he wants, I have to face him.

Miss. Piggy: Oh I do hope my Kermit will be okay, Sora please don't let anything bad happen to him.

Gonzo: Kermit says he'll met Doc Hopper at the "Abandoned Ghost Town," I sure hope he knows what he's doing.

Fozzie: Hey Sora, why did the boy throw his watch out the window? (You choose either "I don't know Fozzie, why? or "Not right Fozzie" if you choose the first one Fozzie says...) He wanted to see time fly, get it? Wocka wocka, ohh I'm just trying to lighten the mood.

Rowlf: Are we ready to go to the Abandoned Ghost town?
(You choose either "Yeah let's go" or "Later," if you choose "Yeah let's go," Rowlf drives you there)

Once Rowlf drives you to "Abandoned Ghost Town"

Kermit: Everyone stay here, this is something I have to do alone.

Sora: We're coming with you Kermit. If Pete is with him, you'll need us.

Donald: That's right.

Kermit: Okay, Sora, let's go.

Piggy: Careful, Kermie.

Kermit, Sora and company go off, walking away from the car with Kermit's friends. Out of nowhere the "Marionette Heartless" attack.

Gameplay: Defeat all the Heartless.

Once the Heartless are defeated.

Sora: I think that's the last of them.

Scooter: Well, hey there.

(Kermit, Sora and company turn around.)

Scooter: Did you guys come to take the "Electric Mayhem challenge?"

Goofy: Electirc Mayhem?

Scooter: Oh, I'm Sorry, I should explain, you see I'm Scooter, the band's manager. Come in, come in.

Donald: What about Doc Hopper and Pete?

Scooter: Oh I forgot to mention the winner gets a special prize.

Donald: Prize! We should do it.

Sora: Well, I don't see Doc Hopper or Pete, no Heartless either. Maybe we have some time, let's see what this is all about.

(Kermit, Sora and company walk into "the House of Mayhem." Loud music plays to the shock of Kermit, Donald and Goofy, it's the Electric Mayhem.)

Scooter: Hey guys, look I found someone to take the "Mayhem Challeage."

Dr. Teeth: Well, well, that's just fantasic.

Goofy: Who are you guys?

Floyd Pepper: We is, am, are and be them who are known as the Electric Mayhem!

Janice: Fer Sure.

Dr.Teeth: Let us introduce ourselves. Known for my golden tooth and golden tones, I'm Dr. Teeth.

Janice: Like I'm Janice on guitar, fer sure, really.

Floyd: I'm Floyd on bass.

Zoot: And I'm...ummmm...I'm...

Floyd: Zoot, sax is your act. Zoot skipped a grove again.

Janice: Oh really.

Animal: AHHHHHHHH!

Donald: What is that?

Floyd: That's just Animal, show them what you do Animal.

Animal: Ahh, what do, eat drums.

(Animal bites on his drums)

Dr. Teeth: No no, beat drums, beat drums.

Animal: Beat drums.

(Animal beats on his drums with his head)

Floyd: Animal, down.

Animal: Down!

Floyd: Back.

Animal: Back!

Floyd: Sit.

Animal: Sit!

Scooter: So you ready Sora? Godda warn you, no one has ever been up to keep up with Animal.

Gameplay: Go up to Scooter, when you're ready to play "the Electric Mayhem Challeage." You must push the buttons when shown, but they move real fast. The band will be playing "Can you picture that?" if you miss ten notes than you lose.

Once you've cleared the Mayhem mini game.

Dr.Teeth: Wow, no one has ever been able to keep up with Animal, good job.

Animal: Good job, good job.

Scooter: Well, you've won. This is yours Sora.

Sora gets the "drum pendant" from Scooter, which, with the help of two friends can summon Animal during battle.

(Fade out)

(Fade back in)

Pete is seen walking though the "Ghost town."

Pete: Where is that old fool? I don't have all the time in the world to just hang around...

(a rain-barrel explodes playing loud music)

Pete: (In fear) Ahhhhhh!

(Dr. Bunsen Honeydew walks out from his lab)

Dr. Honeydew: Oh I see you discover my musical rotating rain-barrel.

Pete: (In anger) What are you trying to do? Give a guy a heart-attack.

Dr.Honeydew: Oh I'm so sorry, please forgive me. I'm Dr. Bunsen Honeydew and this is my assistant, Beaker.

Beaker: Meep Meep!

Dr. Honeydew: Please come in, we make useful inventions that the whole world can use.

(Pete walks into Honeydew's lab with Bunsen and Beaker)

Pete: What in the world is that?

(Pete points to a giant prude)

Dr.Honeydew: A four-foot prude. Thanks to my lasting invention, instant grow pills. They work on anything. But the effect is sadly temporary.

Beaker: (Meeping) Sadly temporary.

(Bunsen shows Pete the jar of pills.)

Pete: (Thinking to himself) Hmmm, those could come in handy.

Dr.Honeydew: I'm sorry did you say something.

Pete: Oh no, friend, hey what's that?

(Bunsen and Beaker look behind them while Pete steals the pills)

Dr.Honeydew: I'm afraid you're mistaking, I don't see anything.

Pete: Not yet.

(It looks as though Pete stuck Bensen and Beaker, but the screen goes black, when the screen comes back Pete is walking out of Bunsen's lab with pills in hand. Doc Hopper finally shows up.)

Pete: It's about time, Hopper, I got a lot of work to do you know.

Hopper: Relax Pete, I'm paying ya enough money.

Pete: Just remember, you can have the frog, but I'll take his friends so Maleficent can turn them into Heartless. That should help get me on her good side, if she even has one.

Kermit: Hopper.


Hopper: Aw, looks who's here. Last chance frog, you gonna volunteer to came and work for me or should Pete and his boys (more Heartless appear) make you.

Kermit: Hopper you gonna be crazy following me all this way. What's the matter with you, why are you doing this to me?

Hopper: All my life I wanted to own a chain of frog leg restaurants and you're the key greenie.

Kermit: Yeah well I got a dream too, but it's about singing and dancing and making people happy. (Sora, Donald and Goofy walk up behind Kermit) That's the kind of dream that gets better the more people you share it with, and I found a whole bunch of friends who have the same dream (the other Muppets walk up) and that sort of makes us a family. I mean who are you sharing your dreams with, who's your friends Doc? Pete there? I think if you look inside your heart, you'll find that you really want to let me and my friends go. But if that's not the kind of man you are, than have your Heartless kill me.

Sora: What?

Everyone is silent as they wait for Doc Hopper's reply. Hopper takes his hat off and drops it on the ground, running his fingers though his hair.

Hopper: Alright Pete, kill him.

The Muppets: What! Oh no.

Sora: Not gonna happen, Pete. We beat you before and we can beat you again.

Pete: Sorry Keyblade master, me and Hopper had a deal and I try to be a man of my word.

Donald: We're not scared of you.

Pete: Oh you will be...

(Hondew and Beaker come running out)

Dr. Honeydew: Someone stop that man, he stole my instant grow pills.

Beaker: Meep meeeeeeep.

Pete: (Laughing) Hey thanks again, four eyes, or no eyes or whatever.

(Pete takes a pill and grows to a huge size, laughing the whole time. Everyone looks scared, minus Gonzo, he's attention is eslewhere.)

Gonzo: Hey wow what's that canon during there.

Kermit: Gonzo this is no time for your crazy acts.

Sora: Wait, Kermit, maybe he's on to something.

Gameplay: You must battle giant Pete with the canon while he's tries to crush you. Gonzo takes awhile to reload the canon, so be sure to make them count. But Pete's giant size is only for a short while, so he'll shrink down back to his normal size, but after awhile will take another "Instant grow pill" to bring him back to his giant size.

Once you defeated Pete

Doc Hopper: You fool, you promise you'd get me the frog. I don't know what's the deal with that fella's keyblade, but you and your friends win frog. I'm out of here.

(Doc Hopper runs away)

Sora: Well Pete, looks like you're out of a deal.

Pete: Well guess there's nothing for me here, I don't think Maleficent really needs a bunch of "whatevers" for Heartless.

(Pete creates his getaway portal and runs off)

Kermit: Hey gang, looks like we might be able to make the audition after all!

Muppets: Hoo ray.

Kermit: Hey Sora you shown some real talent when you were playing with the Mayhem band. Wanna join us on our way to Hollywood?

Sora: Wow me being rich and famous.

Miss.Piggy: Oh Kermie, kissie kissie.

Kermit: Oh Piggy, come on, Sora wacthing.

Sora sees the way Piggy and Kermit are interacting and he thinks of the way him and Kairi use to be together.

Kermit: Well Sora, what do you say?

Sora: Well Kermit, thank you for the offer Kermit, but I have to look for Kairi.

Kermit: Well Sora, I really hope you find your friends.

Rowlf: What's that?

Gonzo: Wow!


The hat Doc Hopper left is floating up and the keyhole is shown. Sora uses his keyblade to lock it.

Gonzo: It's a real shame you guys have to go.

Donald: Why is that?


Rowlf: Fozzie never had a better audience.

Fozzie: So what do you call a boomerang that doesn't come back when you throw it?

Goofy: Gawish, I don't know, what do you call a boomerang that doesn't come back?

Fozzie: A stick, get it, wocka wocka.

Goofy: (Laughs)

Everyone starts laughing.

End

Well like I said some changes have been made from my other verison and I hope everyone enjoyed reading it. Please let me know what you think, feedback would be great.

JJ
 

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That was great. The incorporation of the characters was well done. Even putting Scooter in, I am sorry to say that I had forgotten about them. In the end, you saw of the muppets that had stared in the Muppet Movie. I liked the whole Mayhem challenge. I am wondering what you think Animal would do when he was summoned? I really don't know in my opinion.

I think I remember you saying that you were going to write another one where Sora goes back. That's cool. It would be great if it was at the Muppets Theater, or that was apart of it.

Anyway, I think it would be loads of fun playing this level.
 

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Yeah, I totally dug how you included the EM and Scooter.

But this just made me LOL ...

A four-foot prude.


Sounds like I made a cameo! :big_grin: *argh, chest hurts from ... laughing*

The boss battle is AWESOME. I can so totally see Pete trying that.
 

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Very nice job revising this. Now if you do a "second trip" you could use the Hopper Boss battle idea you had in your last one.
 

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Hehe ... yeah ... I can picture that ...

The Muppets are busy doing mini-games based off of their other movies (because they're filming scenes to make those movies). Hopper shows up and tries to lay the smack down, saying that Kermit has breached his contract by signing on with that movie company instead of just doing Hopper's. Kermit tries to explain that there IS no contract with Hopper ... but Hopper pulls out a forged one. He grows enormous, filled with darkness ... and promptly falls through the theater floor because it can't hold that much weight. :big_grin: You then have a mini-game of flinging chickens and penguins at him until he faints. LOL ...
 

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Thanks guys for taking the time to check it out. Sorry for spelling, typos, and grammer mistakes. They're not strong points of mine, :smile:.

Yeah I do plan on doing a story follow up, but I'm not too sure how I want to go about that, :wink:.

Thanks again guys, hope you've enjoy reading it.
 

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How about the second story takes place at the Muppet Theater? Maybe there can you can be heckled through the whole level by Statler and Waldorf. You can also have some other characters and stuff. I don't know, just throwing out ideas.
 

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I can totally see that happening! :smile: Great job! :wink:
 

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How about the second story takes place at the Muppet Theater? Maybe there can you can be heckled through the whole level by Statler and Waldorf. You can also have some other characters and stuff. I don't know, just throwing out ideas.
Yeah I'm thinking about something like that, I'm not totally sure as of right now though, but thanks again for the suggestions and whatnot,

I can totally see that happening! :smile: Great job! :wink:
I can't wait to read more!
Thanks for taking the time to read it, hope you liked it.
 
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