Fanfic: Hakuna Matata

it's finally here my first muppet fan fiction i worked hard on it so here it is
chapter 1
the new girl
it all started on a snowy day in December in Henson national park. everyday was the same gonzo shot himself out of a canon into the wall, crazy harry blew up everything, Sam the eagle kept ranting about "weirdo's" and scooter was getting himself some coffee. everything was normal except for one thing. scooter heard a slam outside it was a huge one so he ran out the door outside. now, mostly people don't hang out near the Muppet theater but there was a girl in a heavy brown faux-fur jacket sitting on the cold floor. she looked at scooter like how fan girls look at Edward Cullen. Scooter bent down on one knee to get face to face with her " are you ok?" he asked she didn't speak for a while then she softly said " i have no place to go......" "then come in here" scooter insisted. the girl got up and scooter walked with her to the door into the Muppet theater "so why were you out there?" "i used to live in an orphanage but it caught on fire and me and my sister were the only on e's who were not injured" " oh i see" scooter said as he patted her head. he didn't know if it was a girl or not because her face was covered up. he gently took off her hood and saw that she was in fact a girl... a beautiful girl. she had long brown hair and green eyes. "my name is katt." she said katt scooter thought i wonder why she was named that? he paused for a second " i'm scooter" he said "so what was that slam outside?" " oh that? that was just hail and one hit me in the eye and i slamed into the wall" she said
i'll write the next cahpter as soon as i get some ideas

good start Hannie can't wait for more!!

=)

I hope you post the rest soon....
Can't wait!!

I LOVE it!

thank you!!

I love Katt, and I hope you continue your wonderful story soon!

thanks

You're very welcome! Now start writing please!

XD
i may soon but i'm very busy

Ok! I'll wait!

Ahh....a fellow Scooter lover.... Hugs to you for your shared crush on the go-fer, I understand completely. You don't seem very optimistic about this story so I wanna encourage you to keep going, keep writing, keep penning you ideas and editing them until you have it just right. As a very wise and experienced writer on here recently told me, years from now you will go back and read what you've written and hate it, but meanwhile, keep trucking! Trail-and-error is the only way to improve. On thing you can start with is looking over it carefully to make sure everything is capitalized the way it should be. I noticed Scooter's name was left un-capitalized once or twice, just small things like that you can fix to make it flow a little better. Other than that, you have the makings of a good story. We're very curious to see how Scooter helps this pretty Katt out!

Enjoy writing your fic, isn't the best? Like twisting reality the way you want it. Wow, I just made it sound really horrifyingly evil. lol. Here's a virtual muffin for you for starting!!
And merry Christmas!!

thank you!!!
i know my capitalization is bad now of a days and my plot is like oh mai god, i'm just soo busy i can't focus!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!