Jaz: The poetic soul

Misskermie

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I do art.
I do parodies.
I do fanfics.
Why not expand my horizon with some poetry?



Here is one, I call, "It is love." Seen through the eyes of Miss Piggy.:mad:



It is Love




I know that It's Crazy,:crazy:


But it has to be true,

I just can't help feeling,

That I love you.

When I saw that day,

That time, and that place,

I was more than accustomed

To that wonderful face.

I know that your feelings aren't equal

It's true.

But that doesn't mean,

I'll stop loving you.

So what, you're green,

And I'm perfectly pink,

Don't let that stop you.

No sweetie, don't blink.

We're interspecies,

and it's wierd to vous,

But really for me,

it means our love is true.

So take my hand in yours,

No, don't be a hermit.

It's you I love,

my dearest frog, Kermit. :smile:

-Kissy Kissy <3
 

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Ok, Here's one for Fozzie Bear...


When telling jokes I always fall flat
In my tie, fur, and porkpie hat.
The balcony hecklers are mean
When I'm doing the comedy scene
Kermit, my froggy best friend
Is there for me 'til the end
So that makes it all better,
even though I'm not paid too much cheddar
 

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In the voice of Bunsen Honeydew!

"My Pal Beaker"


Here is a friend I intend to keep,
My pal Beaker. The one who says Meep.
He assists me in science as a guinea pig.
And he doesn't care if he's shrunk or made big.
He will always be there for me, and our friends.
I will be with Beaker, til' the end.


...
Yeahhhhhh...
 

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Very nice poetry. Throughout some of them (most notably the last two over the first one), a few rhymes seemed a little forced, but other than that, they were very good.
 

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I callz this one:



BEAKER




Shrunk, Blown Up, Burned...
Is it worth the money earned?
He works with Bunsen Honeydew,
that's the guy who puts him through,
all the pain that he endures.
How could Beaker be sure,
To hang with a guy causes pain?
Man, Beaker is insane!
 

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Finally, a new poem!

Very lovely. Just one minor nitpick I have is that lines such as "How could Beaker be sure" and "Man, Beaker is insane" are hard to read because they are lacking syllables in comparison to their matched rhymes. If you add stuff like "How could Beaker be so sure" and "Man, this Beaker is insane," it makes them easier to read.
 

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My Diamonte poem on K+P..


Contrast of two lovers
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Kermit
Working, whispering, hugging
Kind, busy
ill-tempered, carefree
Relaxing, yelling, kissing
Miss Piggy
 
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