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The 5ive Present: The Muppet's vs. Las Vegas

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Beauregard, Sep 26, 2005.

  1. TogetherAgain

    TogetherAgain Well-Known Member

    <runs in, very much out of breath>

    ....ok.....I... read.... up to.... um.... Jerry Stinger? Yeah, Jerry Stinger, with Beaker meep meep and... I love what I've read, love every inch of what I've read, and I can't wait to read more, and I would read more, except... it's late, and I have to teach tomorrow morning... and I have my own stuff to write, so... But Beau, I wanted to tell you, I have FINALLY started reading this excellent, wonderful script, and I keep laughing and laughing and.... <collapses>
  2. TogetherAgain

    TogetherAgain Well-Known Member

    Ain't it just amazing what insomnia does to me? Now I've read all that's been posted, I love it, and I'm ever so impatiently waiting for more. As usual.
  3. MrsPepper

    MrsPepper Active Member

    bEau I just want t comment, i can't remember if I have or not. These scrips are amazing, and you and everyone who wrote them deserve 10 gold stars each. But it's taking me a while to read through them so i'm a little behind! :concern: So I don't have alot of specific things to comment on just yet.

    Sorry for the spelling errors.. I don't feel like fixing 'em.
  4. Beauregard

    Beauregard Well-Known Member

    No problem with the spellings, Pepper, thanks for commenting!

    I thought of you while I was posting, cause there's a whole bunch of Sal in there!!!
  5. MrsPepper

    MrsPepper Active Member

    Oh, you though of me, eh? Excellent. Though this Sal is much funnier than my version is!
    So, yay, I'm FINALLY up to date! I LOVE the bits with Sal and Johnny, i can't get enough of those two. They crack me up.
    So, here's the verdict, with as much constructive critism that I can pack into one post! ;)

    Parts I liked:
    The Jerry Stinger bit with the meeping - that was just good clean fun, in my opinion, as Beaker is just being misinterpreted, and Jerry Springer has a history of taking things way out of control. Compared to some other references, this one is very mild.
    Piggy exchange with the sandwhich - that was gold. Complete mayhem, I loved it.
    The courtroom - love the fact that it was sung! Made me laugh. THough I will admit I couldn't follow it very well.
    Mahna Mahna - YES. That was just awesome.
    Kermit and Fozzie - really cute, touching song between them. :) Fozzie and Kerm haven't had many good "best friends" type moments recently.
    Johnny and Sal - Kinda didn't get the bit with the typewriter, but the lines between these two were so much fun. I LOVE these guys!! The thug part, and the hatbox part, were particularily funny for me.

    Parts I didn't like:
    Prison scene- WHAT is OJ simpson doing in a muppet movie?!? I mean, Winona Ryder as a reference isn't so bad, as I think her sentence was for shoplifting, but that was way too far. Also, the rest of the scene doesn't make a whole lot of sense at all.
    Robin cameo - Um, what is Robin doing in a dark alley, acting as the middle man between Johnny Fiama and some gangsters?! I didn't understand that at all! I mean, yeah sure, it's fun to throw muppets in to get some cameos, but it just doesn't make sense.
    Hoawrd the Pig - (and the exchange between Gonzo and Rizzo immediately afterwards) - I'm not gonna lie, I laughed out loud so much reading that. But I think it's a bit gratuitous, and shouldn't really be in there.
    Kermit - it seems like Kermit is the only muppet who can make things happen, but he's stuck in jail! Everyone else seems a bit useless, like their scenes are just excuses to make really funny exchanges (though that has been acheived), but nothing is advancing.
  6. Beauregard

    Beauregard Well-Known Member

    In retrospect,i agree with you. At the time I wrote it, I had no idea abotu O.J. but Scoot said it t'would be funny.

    Robin..ok, I must admit, I thought it was hilarious that he was acting between J and S and gangsters... :p

    H. the Pig...hmm..agreed. but...I did snigger...

    And, hmm...you are right. Most of these scenes would have hit the cutting room florr...but, there's action coming soon!!!
  7. MrsPepper

    MrsPepper Active Member

    Don't worry, I'm definately enjoying it! I can't wait to see what is next to come. :)
  8. Beauregard

    Beauregard Well-Known Member

    Lemme see...a weird Bunsen abd Beaker expreiment...a Gonzo song...a chicken factory...
  9. MrsPepper

    MrsPepper Active Member

    **yaws** Oh, so nothing interesting, then. ;)
  10. TogetherAgain

    TogetherAgain Well-Known Member

    Beau, could you do me a favor? Stop "seeing" and start posting! Me wants to know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!
  11. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Her and me both!
  12. Whatever

    Whatever Active Member

    Update! :halo: Update! :halo: Update!:halo:
  13. Beauregard

    Beauregard Well-Known Member

    *covers mouth withhand*

    Oh my...I forgoet dis creation, h'ockey!!!

    Update coming tomorra!!!

    Beau
  14. MrsPepper

    MrsPepper Active Member

    oh, excellent!
  15. sarah_yzma

    sarah_yzma Active Member

    wow! So many memories! I'm glad you all like it, although I only contributed about 2 or 3 thrings...I just got to read it as it was written :D

    I still love it and it was fun to read and talk about :D
  16. Beauregard

    Beauregard Well-Known Member

    Ok. I'm sorry (again) for not posting more. I certainly shall do so next oppertunity I get...
  17. Whatever

    Whatever Active Member

  18. Beauregard

    Beauregard Well-Known Member

    Er...oops...*in the words of Animal* Sah-reh...
  19. Whatever

    Whatever Active Member

  20. theprawncracker

    theprawncracker Well-Known Member

    *loads penguin cannon* Yes Beau, an update would be nice...or else...*fires penguin in Beau's general direction*


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