The Muppets and the Dark Crystal

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Ooh ooh!! I have a David Bowie crush!!! :wink: Ok, so it's not quite as bad as my Scooter crush...anywhoo, you write the both of them very well! Might wanna slow it down a little though. I love the pause for dramatic effect, and the way you write yourself into the story--very fourth-wall breaking Muppetness. Keep it coming Dominic! I love your name by the way!)
 

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Ooh ooh!! I have a David Bowie crush!!! :wink: Ok, so it's not quite as bad as my Scooter crush...anywhoo, you write the both of them very well! Might wanna slow it down a little though. I love the pause for dramatic effect, and the way you write yourself into the story--very fourth-wall breaking Muppetness. Keep it coming Dominic! I love your name by the way!)
Thank you very much for your kind comments and advice!
 

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Chap 19
( Jennifer-"It's about time! Let's get started! I wanna know what the monster is)
Ludo stopped, and looked curiously at the Muppets.
"Calm down Ludo!"Sarah called.
"Ludo sorry,"Ludo said.
"He speaks just like Elmo," whispered Red.
"Elmo never noticed he talks like that before. Elmo guesses it all came naturally to Elmo,"
"He sure does,"Mokey whispered.
"Hi I'm Sarah, and these are my friends Hoggle, Ludo, and Sir Didymus. And thsi is my younger brother Toby," A 15 year old boy stepped in front of Sarah.
"Hello Toby,"Kermit said.
"Hi,"Toby replied polietly.
"Well guys this is it,"Kermit said.
"Wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"called a voice.
"Who are you?"asked Kermit.
"Aughra! Here's a crystal shard, so you can destroy the Skesis!"she said.
"What you two didn't tell us that?"Kermit asked.
"Sorry we forgot"Jen said feeling silly.
"Good grief,"Kermit replied."Well anyway this is it. We have to go into the castle"
 

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Chap. 20.
"Now we must be very careful,"Kermit warned his friends.
"Why? Things will really heat up in the Second Story!"Scooter said.
"True,"Kermit said "But still be careful!"
"OK!"Scooter said.
They glanced around the room, thinking nothing bad would happen.
"Shouldn't we ask those nice men other there?"Fozzie asked.
"Fozzie those are the bad guys!"Kermit said.
"Oh."
"Good thing no villians have been seen yet,"Red said.
"I wouldn't say that,"came a voice.
"Oh no!"cried all the Muppets together.
 

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Oh no!! These little snippets are killing me. Can't wait for more!
 

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Chap 21.
"Well aren't you a very brave group?"Jareth said circling the Muppets.
"I'm sorry to say I will have to kill all of you. It's a shame really when you've come so far!"
"We're not afraid of you!"Kermit said.
"That is a problem. I suppose I'll be able to fix it easily though,"Jareth responded. Jareth muttered some strange dialect.
"Hey boss you caught your victims!"Bobo said gleefully.
Jareth kept muttering on and on and then pointed at Metora.
"No Metora!"Rugby said. The space queen action figure tried hard to avoid contact with Jareth, but he was so hypnotic she could no longer fight him.
"Look away!"cried Kermit, but it was too late. The doll disapeared in mid-air.
"NO! WHY DID YOU DO THAT?!!!!!!!!!!"asked Scooter.
"Because I'm the villian you silly boy! Now get in your cells Muppets, except for you Toby. How about we have a nice chat boy to boy?!!!!!!!!!"Jareth said evily.
Bobo and Uncle Deadly looked at the Muppets nervously. They had not known how dangerous the Goblin King really was until Metora's fate and knew they were partially to blame. That hoped they would be able to set things right in the end.
 

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Chap. 22
"This may be the end,"Kermit said to his friends.
"Yeah,"Scooter said sadly. He glanced at the frog who had practically raised him. His Uncle JP would bring him over to the theater everytime he had to babysit his nephew. Over the years the two began to become closer.Kermit hugged the young boy knowing how frightened he truly felt.
"Thanks Kermit,"Scooter said sadly.
"That's alright."
Wembley glanced around the cell.
"Gobo what's he going to do to us?"
"Don't worry Wembley....you'll see your good old buddy Mudwell soon,"Gobo said. He didn't want to hide the truth from his innocent best friend.
"I can't take it anymore!"Bobo said, he grabbed the key and unlocked the door!
"Now go save Toby!"
 

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That whole chapter made me "AWWWW!!!" Especially Kermit and Scooter's sweet little moment, and Bobo at the end! And Wembley! How did I forget him? The love level is increasing exponentially.....:smile:
 

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"Well well well Toby! It's time you and I got acquainted!"Jareth said.
"Tell me about yourself son!"
"Well....when I was little Sarah told me about the time you kidnapped me, and marry her. Then when I was older I told the best stories in my Kindergarten-10th grade class. Then-"
"That's enough! You are so BORING! I was going to kill you anyway, but at least it won't be with any DISAPPOINMENT!Jareth said.
"Whatever,"Toby replied.
"Leave him alone Jareth!"Kermit yelled running in just in time.
"Well then! You look a bit tied up at the moment!"Jareth said tying up the Muppets with his magic.
"Now you will all die!"
"Oh dear!"Kermit said. "This will not end well!"
"You're not kidding buddy!"Jareth said. "Now die!"
Bobo hummed to himself as he paced.
"Hello stupid minion! What are you up to?
"This!"Bobo and Deadly stuffing the shard into the crystal causing the skesis to form with the mystics and become one once again.
"No!"Jareth said freezing solid.
"Thanks Bobo and Deadly!"said all the Muppets together.
"Now where do we go?"asked Uncle Deadly?
"You come with us!"Kermit said. "Don't be silly!"
(Author's Note)
There's one chapter left of this story! Then there will be 2 more episodes after this!
 

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YAYAY!! GO BOBO AND DEADLY! >jumps up and down with pom-poms< Best series ever! Can't wait to see what's left...
 
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