The Creator

[mo]

That was cute and magnifique!! You made your own little peom, and made me smile!! Kay, I'll tell you guys what I had in mind when writing this peom.
I was thinking about how Jim started out as a little boy and kept believing in himself and his dreams. Then as he got older, his ideas grew too and even though he passed on, his creations and imagination left such an impact on the world. Each time we watch or read about Jim's creations, he is being reborn.

that's definitely what you should do!
I think maybe you should write a book or keep a book full of these poems your very talented!

 

[bouncingbabyfig]

that's definitely what you should do!
I think maybe you should write a book or keep a book full of these poems your very talented!

Thank you! I hust have to make sure I proof read them first....

 

[bouncingbabyfig]

Destiny's Garden
By: BBF
New age, old age. Worn hands work.
Creating time his Destiny's quirk.
Taking time away. Ah, that's a specialty!
Something of his extraordinary quality.
But why did he take my creator?
My friend and honest mentor.
Ah, Destiny is a cruel thing indeed.
It carries all the good and bad seed.
In a sack, in a bag. Plants them he does.
Carefully now, it's all that was.
In Destiny's garden of a fool's life.
Until he cuts the vine down with a swift knife.
Jim's was worth living, why cut at that time?
He was gentle, smart, quiet, and kind!
Ah Destiny, you old coot! How you slice!
Controlling me with your blood red dice!
And who is your partner? Who never comes late?
Indeed I should say, the clockworks of Fate!
Why take away the good in this world?
Why take away what God has unfurled?
Indeed I should say, but needless it is,
To speak my my mind like an unfinished kiss.
For in your garden, all things grow.
In his place, I just don't know.
But new things are planted,
New age, old age. You have no preference.
And to you there is no difference.
Ah Fate, Destiny. You are cruel.​

I feel a little bitter and sad today, so that is the reason this poem is... in a way depressing. I guess. But please review!

 

[basicallygood]

Jeez, I'm tearing up! It's just so beautiful! And I definitely think you succeeded in making it sound like it's coming from Jim. Amazing job!

 

[Collgoff]

That was nice!

 

[mo]

that was so amazingly bitter sweet!

 

[bouncingbabyfig]

Life is unique
By: BBF

Life is unique, it leads you away
On a path that sometimes you might stray.
Humbling yourself, you try once more
Hoping the Almighty might open His door.
Sometimes we're caught in a patch of weeds
With grasp our hearts with devilish needs.
There are those who fall and those who rise
To take their place and find the sky.
We all love different things, the muppets are for me
I have been loving them before I was three!
To dance with fraggles, sing with a pig!
And to take on the name of a sweet little fig.
To explode and return with barely a scrape
Or be captured to save a theater and tied with duck tape!
Oh to be a muppet I dreamed, but it appears I must hold off,
and leave behind wiggie, newsie, ru, miss kermie, and collgoof.
I do hope to return with a flourish and shout
In hopes to see all without doubt.
I love you all, why, how could I not?
Shant I forget what I surely not forgot.
Basically good, count, countfan, muppetfan123,
We are all fans of muppets you see!
So with a wave of my hand and tip of my hat,
I leave this forum to you to use and chat.
But don't forget me for who I am,
Nor who you are like an old shut clam.
Saying goodbye. OH! Why IS it so sad?!
I can always think of the good times we had!
I just wish I had more to remember,
I only joined a little past september.
But these tears won't dry on their own,
Now I leave broken and alone.
Goodbye my dearest friends. Goodbye.
With all the love in the world and possibly the universe,
~Figgie

 

[Collgoff]

Oh Figgie that nicest poem I ever read!
I sure wish you don't have to say good bye!
Oh I'll sure miss you being here!
Here's a song and a video as good bye gifts!
http://www.gosdin.net/rebound/fraggle/pedals of a rose.mp3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f5_y0s-COl8

 

[Hubert]

Oh Figgie that nicest poem I ever read!

Agreed. Keep writing. You're very good at it.

 

[bouncingbabyfig]

Tart an Sweet
by: BBF

I love chocolate, it's so tasty and sweet.
Unwrapping it, hershey's makes a great treat.
They come in bars or even as a kiss.
You don't need relationships when you have this.
It's like life, all wrapped in silver or gold.
You take it one gulp, not letting it grow old.
It's a great kick, a spur of heart.
When on a diet, it ain't a great place to start.
It's sweet as it melts on your tongue,
Bitter once it's all gone.
Sometimes you come across a few nuts, even a fruit.
Sometimes you're lucky, and you can spend a dollar for the group.
Once it ends, where do we go?
Well, if you're like me, you go to the store for more.
~The End