How I Spent My Summer Vacation (A Muppet Fic)

[LipsGF4Life]

That was awsome!

 

[Slackbot]

*chuckles. Nice work. I really like what you did in this fic. Sweetums at college was a fun idea. I can just see him taking notes, carefully holding a pencil that is the size of a toothpick in his massive fingers. Nice wrap-up. I imagined it as an end-od-summer party, with the camera wandering around and catching little bits and snatches of conversation.

Welcome to the Finished Fics club! May there be many more.

 

[charlietheowl]

Thanks guys!

I wanted to go for that sort of feeling for the last chapter, sort of like a closing credits to a movie or something, with the music playing and the camera panning around, lingering on the ever-silent Lips for the last shot, hahaha.

 

[newsmanfan]

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And your dialogue there was so spot-on I could identify EVERY character without dialogue tags! LOL Well done!!

Lowly Worm as Trotsky?? Then who's Lenin? The cat? And where does Che fit in??

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[charlietheowl]

Thank you! I'm not versed enough in Scarry critique to figure out all the matches, but look out for Sweetums' thesis A Post-Modern Critique in Busytown's Economy: How The Worm Can Rise out of the Apple.

 

[WebMistressGina]

OMG Charlie what a great ending! And THANK YOU! I've been trying to learn the name of the band who does this song, cause I happen to enjoy it, and I had no idea it was War. Another reason to like them.

Definitely a great first foray! I'll look for more of your stuff!

 

[charlietheowl]

I'm glad I could help you with your song search, hahaha! That's definitely one of their best songs.

Thanks for reading!

 

[Ruahnna]

Lovely work, dear. You did a very nice ensemble piece, which is where the muppets really shine. And yes--welcome to the Finished Fics Club. We meet every other whenever and whine incessantly about the fics we haven't finished....

Sorry I missed the actual party, but I sure am glad I didn't miss the actual story. Bravo, sweetie.

 

[charlietheowl]

Thank you!