Okay, now that I read through it again making some small fixes, here are some thoughts. 1 Dunno if you meant it this way, but I keep seeing Tricia as a grown yet still youthful Muppet molegirl version of Ginny. And I'm liking her interaction with Clifford. 2 *Tries to think how Piggy—or any other famed actress for that matter—would get the other kind of article she received. Fanboy, with some sense of inner delight goes into the intimate apparel store. Saleswoman: Can I help you? Fanboy: I'm just looking for something for…my girl. Saleswoman gives him a look of "oh really?" Fanboy tries to weather her look as he makes his purchase. *Back home, fanboy makes sure the article won't be creased or damaged as he puts it in a big enough mailer in hopes of getting it back with his desired's autograph. Yeah... I'm just gonna move on. That kind of thing makes it harder for the rest of us who've never stepped foot in one of those places. 3 Harrison's comment when dipping Kristen... It reminds me of the edited footage when John Henson—not Jim's second son, no relation to Jim's family either—the host of E!'s Talk Soup spliced himself into the shot where John Travolta says, "like, there must be two of me." 4 *Waits to see who else gets the reference when the girls called Piggy out on what she was writing to Kermit. 5 When Piggy's "confronting" Fleet at the mailbox, she says that he can't make things nice by saying what he thinks she wants to hear. This is something that needed to be adressed between them. It makes me think Piggy's making a stand for herself, somewhat akin to the new movie when Kermit tries to get her back not for getting "her" back but getting her back for the purpose of saving the theater that's been like a second home to them. 6 As good as my word... Yeah, way to go Fleet, make her feel worse, that'll win her over. He's implying that he'll always be there, unlike the frog who couldn't make it because the edits they'd worked hard and frenetically on making somehow went missing, meaning they had to do it all over again cancelling whatever plans both her husband and chief assistant respectively had. 7 The buddy Rowlf happens to know, would that be a certain affable amphibian? 8 Not sure I like Piggy actively seeking Fleet to figure out who was posing as her agent, Marty, here in New York. But at least that little bubble's popped. Good thing she hurried back inside after the conversation with Scribbler before he had a chance to overtake her. *Creep alert activate. Thanks for posting, hope to read more when you can get it to us.