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Kermie's Girl (ushy-gushy fanfic)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Ruahnna, Apr 21, 2006.

  1. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Okay, now that I read through it again making some small fixes, here are some thoughts.

    1 Dunno if you meant it this way, but I keep seeing Tricia as a grown yet still youthful Muppet molegirl version of Ginny. And I'm liking her interaction with Clifford.

    2 *Tries to think how Piggy—or any other famed actress for that matter—would get the other kind of article she received.
    Fanboy, with some sense of inner delight goes into the intimate apparel store.
    Saleswoman: Can I help you?
    Fanboy: I'm just looking for something for…my girl.
    Saleswoman gives him a look of "oh really?"
    Fanboy tries to weather her look as he makes his purchase.
    *Back home, fanboy makes sure the article won't be creased or damaged as he puts it in a big enough mailer in hopes of getting it back with his desired's autograph.
    Yeah... I'm just gonna move on. That kind of thing makes it harder for the rest of us who've never stepped foot in one of those places.

    3 Harrison's comment when dipping Kristen... It reminds me of the edited footage when John Henson—not Jim's second son, no relation to Jim's family either—the host of E!'s Talk Soup spliced himself into the shot where John Travolta says, "like, there must be two of me."

    4 *Waits to see who else gets the reference when the girls called Piggy out on what she was writing to Kermit.

    5 When Piggy's "confronting" Fleet at the mailbox, she says that he can't make things nice by saying what he thinks she wants to hear.
    This is something that needed to be adressed between them. It makes me think Piggy's making a stand for herself, somewhat akin to the new movie when Kermit tries to get her back not for getting "her" back but getting her back for the purpose of saving the theater that's been like a second home to them.

    6 As good as my word... Yeah, way to go Fleet, make her feel worse, that'll win her over.
    He's implying that he'll always be there, unlike the frog who couldn't make it because the edits they'd worked hard and frenetically on making somehow went missing, meaning they had to do it all over again cancelling whatever plans both her husband and chief assistant respectively had.

    7 The buddy Rowlf happens to know, would that be a certain affable amphibian?

    8 Not sure I like Piggy actively seeking Fleet to figure out who was posing as her agent, Marty, here in New York. But at least that little bubble's popped. Good thing she hurried back inside after the conversation with Scribbler before he had a chance to overtake her. *Creep alert activate.

    Thanks for posting, hope to read more when you can get it to us.
  2. Muppetfan44

    Muppetfan44 Active Member

    Yay for a new update! I loved the part when Piggy decided to write Kermit a letter instead of a text or e-mail- I'm sure Kermit will love it when he gets the letter in the mail- and he better come to New York soon to protect his lady from all of these creeps!!

    Interesting to read how Piggy was trying to figure out what Scribbler meant, and even more interesting that it affected her so much- glad to read her getting a little angry that Kermit didn't show up for the premiere- she definitely had a right to be angry and hopefully she won't bottle that up forever. Loved the bit with Rowlf and how he described what happened to Kermit- that's definitely the way Rowlf would put it.

    As always, can't wait to read more!!
  3. newsmanfan

    newsmanfan Well-Known Member

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    Hmmm. Musing cap on...

    Okay, in no particular order:
    Asking Fleet about Stalker Seymour's identity is actually a good idea, from a purely practical standpoint; Fleet has NOT been aware that Seymour followed Piggy to NYC as well, and I could absolutely see him going out of his way to ruin anyone trying to harm "his pig." However, that does amount to using the scrawny little hack, and honestly you've made him a sympathetic enough character (well, maybe that's the wrong word, but the schmuck has pathos now!) that I'd wince to see him so blatantly used...but maybe they can come to some sort of understanding. If only Fleet could get over the whole Kermit thing!

    Chocolates and undies! Er...not to be indelicate, but would anyone else in the cast even fit in scanty lacy thingies meant for Piggy?

    :mad: Grrr...WATCH IT, concussion-brain!
    :news: Huh?? It wasn't me! It was that OTHER newsperson!
    :mad: Yeah, right!

    Um. Oops.
    LOVE Piggy writing an actual love letter, for the same reason I sent out actual Valentines this year. Mail is becoming a lost art. And I doubt Piggy would actually refer to any of the delectable positions from the Kama Frogra...in public, anyway...

    The other couples were a nice treat for this V-Day as well: Tricia and Cliff (hmm...are they planning on trying out some of those hastily-hidden prizes later?) and Rowlf and a high-strung pooch made for nice additions. Gotta love the old "just one'a the pack" date nights!

    Sounds like Kermit and Scooter are back on track. I hope the saboteurs have nothing worse in store for them...or else there's gonna be a Classic Frog Meltdown!

    Kudos on a wonderful chapter!!

    Uh, hey Ed. Clerks don't give snooty looks anymore. Anyone buying anything is a GOOD thing these days! They only look at men funny when asked where the dressing rooms are....;)
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  4. bouncingbabyfig

    bouncingbabyfig Well-Known Member

    The Forum is alive with the sound of Ush Gush!
    With the crashes of love makes the day new!! Happy V-Day Rue!! I enjoyed Piggy writing a letter to her beloved Kermit and chocolates and lingerie just kinda made me blush, only because I found some in my mum's drawer from when she was in her twenties.... Scary thought that!:scary: Newsie, Men actually ask for where the dressing rooms are located? And how would you know?;) As always, I love to hear your stories! Please have a wonderful day!:)
  5. Ruahnna

    Ruahnna Well-Known Member

    Yay for ush gush! (Sneaking in to check on the forum--supposed to be writing papers....)
  6. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Very sneaky of Ru. Don't forget there's an open convo I've got if you want to chime in.
  7. miss kermie

    miss kermie Well-Known Member

    Whoa, hate to interupt the paper talk, but...
    *blinks eyes*
    No Way!
    *Rubs eyes*
    Wait... Way! It's Ru! OMGONZO! Happiness!
    It's been so long! *Checks watch* It's been...
    Oh, my watch doesn't work.
    Anyway! Nice chapter, and good to see you back!
  8. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Bringing this masterpiece back to the top where it deservedly belongs, especially today, in honor of Aunt Ru.
    *Hope my own attempt at frog-pig loving was good enough given such high standards.
  9. miss kermie

    miss kermie Well-Known Member

    Yes. Bravo count. That was very nice, allow me to contribute with this post!

    And yes, especially Ru!!!
  10. gonzosgirl1987

    gonzosgirl1987 Active Member

    oh god i'm in love like for sure :flirt:
  11. gonzosgirl1987

    gonzosgirl1987 Active Member

    mop bucket on aisle 1 please!! i don't think there is anything left of me its so romantic i'm melting from all of this
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  12. gonzosgirl1987

    gonzosgirl1987 Active Member

    i'm so tired for the last three nights i've come home from work and read for a couple of hours and i'm this far already i love this story so much the bed is calling but theb eyes won't stop reading!!! :sleep:
  13. miss muppet

    miss muppet Active Member

    WOW I love it I stayed up all night reading it I could have cried at the romance wonderful xxƠ̴̴͡.̮Ơ̴̴̴͡
  14. newsmanfan

    newsmanfan Well-Known Member

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    'Cause I know Ru's papers for her classes are almost done...BUMP.

    :news: Ack! What was that?

    It's not night. Promise.

    :news: Oh. Whew...okay. Nice scoop too.

    Thanks. I try.
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  15. miss kermie

    miss kermie Well-Known Member

    Well, I'm doing this 'cuz I'm bored, and I have the need to read, and I also have the need to entertain. So...

    *ahem* Naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaag! *bows* Thank you, Thank you, I'll be in my trailer.
  16. WebMistressGina

    WebMistressGina Well-Known Member

    Right, so first things first -

    Hi EVERYBODY!

    Second - it took me around a week and a half to get to this point and I have to say...I am hooked. Being new to Muppet fan fiction (but not new to fan fiction or the Muppets), I have to say that I'm glad my first foray was to find this site.

    Not even sure where to begin on this whopper of a story (and I thought I wrote long epics! :D ) other than to say 'wow' with a capital W-O-W. Characters are straight on and I can literally see this in my head; honestly, I wonder if I can get to the awesomeness of your (and the others) knowledge of Muppet lore (but I'm a determined girl...)

    Eagerly awaiting to see the next chapter with baited breath. Okay, probably not so baited, but you know...awaiting am I.
  17. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Dashing out of doors soon, but please, do post when you can Aunt Ru.

    And welcome to WebMistress Gina, always nice to have another ficlover on board. :jim:
  18. Ruahnna

    Ruahnna Well-Known Member

    Awwww. So glad you are enjoying. It is getting a bit on the long side. (I think I passed up The Da Vinci Code word count some months ago.) Be sure and check out the Fanfic Library Index to find a list of everybody's stuff.

    Welcome, welcome! Please post your own when you can!

    (Sorry everybody! I hate to "fake post" to my own story but I'm working to get these last few papers out and then I'll be free for a few, um, days. But guess what?!! I made a perfect grade in my first posted class grade! Woo-hoo!)

    Auntie Ru, who is tired of writing papers and would like to be writing story!
  19. WebMistressGina

    WebMistressGina Well-Known Member

    I am indeed. :) I think I've read just about everything in the library (which is how I got here in the first place, thank you very much Google:super: ) and while I already had ideas thanks to my millionth viewing of Muppets 2011 (which of course prompted me to go back and watch the other Muppet movies, in order), it's nice to gleam a bit more info in regards to the whole gang when reading some of these.

    Expect me to ask a ton of questions, as I try as hard as I can to make sure I have the research to back up these crazy ideas of mine (which often means I spend more time on Wiki Walks than actual writing:eek: ).

    No worries on length for me; I am a habitual long story writer. In fact, I think I'm incapable of writing a short story. A 10,000 word story is probably as close as I'll get and that's on a bad day of just spewing whatever my brain throws at me. It's finally sunny and today is supposed to be creative writing day, so maybe I'll sit down with something; as long as "the Muppet" (my nickname for the kid I'm watching) allows me to get work done.

    'Grats on the grades, yo!:):news::electric:
  20. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    If you have questions, then you can post them in the Fanfic Ideas Questions thread started by Slackbot. You might have to search for it, as it may have been pushed down by all the stories that keep popping up here on the boards. Hope this helps and welcome to our world. :D


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