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A World of Darkness

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction and Fan Art' started by KittyxMs Pepper, Jan 4, 2012.

  1. Hello, my name is Kathryn, but you can call me Kitty, this is my first fan-fic, and first post and I'm not to good of a writer, I like when someone gives me pointers, or reminders of some sort about what I can do to improve my fic. I'm only 12 years old so please don't be to harsh, also, please comment what you think about my fic and if I should post more?
    The beginning of the chapter is not so much about muppets, but about getting the know the characters, Enjoy!

    Chapter one: I Miss You
    The lights shown down on her face. The roaring crowd reaching out to her. She was having the best time ever, rockin' with her favourite band in the world; Electric Mayhem. She knew just about everything about them, and had listened to all their C.D's. She looked over her shoulder at the flimsy yet steardy bass player himself. He gave her a light nod and smiled at her, gesturing to play for the crowd, so she did.

    She played electric guitar, her most favourite instument in the world. And her guitar was her best friend, she carried it everywhere, and she did not once get it dirty, smudged or lost it. She and her guitar we're like peanut to butter, corn to flakes, Zoot to his own saxaphone! Her guitar never left her side, and she always played it when she was down, frusterated, or even cheerful. Her amazing guitar solo was finally over, ending the song. The four boys in the group of six walked up to her and smiled.

    "Hayley..." the trumpet player with shaggy hair said to her in a quiet voice.

    "Hayley" the timid and blue sax player said the same thing.

    "Hayley!" the bass player said louder.

    "HAYLEY!" the keyboardist, i guess you can say, was practically screaming in her ear.

    "HAYLEY! GET UP!" everyone shouted at her immediatly.
    The room went pitch black, the only thing you could see was her standing with a blank expression on her face, with her guitar in her hands, she looked around the empty space.

    "For crying out loud Hayley Parkers get up!" Hayley jumped up and fell to the ground, a loud thump awakened her completely.

    "I'm up! I'm up! what's the emergency?"

    "You missy are going to be late for school!" Her mother pointed a firm finger at Hayley. "Now get up off the floor, get dressed, do all your morning stuff and go to school! I will not stand to see my only daughter get imperfect grades and not become a docter or lawer that I want!"

    "Mom! I said I wanted to be a musician" she walked over to her giant poster of the six band members of Electric Mayhem and admired it, "and have a chance to someday work with EM" she couldn't stop gazing at the leader of the group, the most amazing member there was, with his perfect smile, and his fluffy tangerine colored hair, he was perfe--

    "You will not become a musician! that's final!" her mother stormed out of her room slamming the door closed.
    Hayley looked a the door with a very angry look, her mother never supported her dream of being a musician, she just wants a perfect daughter, being a docter or lawer. alwasy getting a fair amount of money, never late for work, having a nice house of her own, never, never would that happen. Hayley garuanteed it.

    Hayley was 17 years old, it was her last year of high school, she went to 'Toburn District High School' or as she called it: Perfect school for perfect kids crap school! She hated her life, she hated her mom, she would still have her dad; but he died in a car crash years ago, when Hayley was only wee, 7 years to be excact. Ever since the insadint, Hayley's mom wanted her to be a perfect child to "support your father and make him proud" as she would say. To be honest, her father always supported her choice of jammin' out on her mini guitar when she was 6. Her mother just scolded at the sight of it.

    Hayley got dressed in a light purple tank top with black, torn up jeans, and pink sneakers with the laces all loose, she also had medium, dark brown, black hair with bangs that went over her left eye. Her eyes were an iris green, pretty as the morning dew on the grass on an early sunday morning in Spring. She grabbed her bag, and her black guitar case and walked out thr front door, making sure that her mom didn't see her, she didn't need another lecture saying what she can and cannot wear.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    At school that morning, she met up with her best friend, Kaytlin. They were best buds, they were alwasy there for eachother and always were together. Hayley loved Kaytlin as if she was her own sister, of course, she loved her guitar too. Kayltin had long red hair and wore a pretty blue top and black jeans. Kaytlin understood Hayley, how her mom never wanted her to be a musician, a docter or lawer would suit her far more superior, but Kaytlin always believed in Hayley and supported her fully. Kaytlin also played an instrument, but only in band, she never loved her flute as much as Hayley loved her guitar, but she did love playing; for a flute, boy did she know how to rock out while playing.

    "Hayley!" yelled Kaytlin, she ran over to Hayley in a mear second and gave her bestest friend a small hug, "How was the morning?" She knew exactly how Hayley had to deal with her mother screeching at her everyday.

    "Just like every other one of course" She had her head down and guitar in hand. Hayley was far more timid then most folks. Kaytlin on the other hand was very crazy, she loved to jump around and talk.

    "Oh well, at least you're here now instead of that nightmare house!" she smiled at Hayley trying to lift her spirits. Of course she did, she did everyday and would keep continueing to until the end of time, "Come on, lets go to band" She grabbed Hayley's arm and dragged her to the doors of the school as Hayley tried to wriggle free from her clutches.

    When they reached band, everyone else of course was there, ready to practise and rock out. Hayley knew that something would make her day brighter, maybe Electric Mayhem will, they always did make her feel warm inside, as if they were her brothers and sisters. Hayley took out her guitar and waited patientally for the music teacher to start talking, she tuned her guitar every morning and every night before she left and before she fell asleep. Kaytlin say next to Hayley, she took out her silver shining instrument and put it together, then waited while talking to the people around her.

    "Quiet! Quiet please!" The teacher took his conducting stick and tapped the music stand. The music teacher's name was Dylan, Dylan rockier. So everyone called him Mr. Rockier, pronounced rock-ear. That was a perculiar name for a band teacher, because it had the name rock in it, and he teached rock. Hayley and Kaytlin were very fond of Dylan, they looked up to him like a best friend. "Today we will be composing some songs we can play at our concert! The spring concert is just around the corner and we still need to prepare a song!"

    Everyone agreed that they should make a song, so they did, well, they tried to. Everyone's mind seemed to be out in space for some reason, only a couple poeple pitched in to help, but the music they wrote didn't sound all that nice...
    ..............
    After class Hayley spoke to Dylan

    "I'll meet up with you after ok?"

    "Gotcha" Kaytlin then left without asking what's it about.

    "D-Dylan?" Hayley studdered when trying to get his attention.

    "Yes Hayley is something on your mind?" Dylan was also just about her age, he helped out with the music teacher sometimes when she was away or when she was a little bit busy. He looked up to her while rustling through some papers of music sheets from the Wizard of Oz.

    "I was wondering if I could stay and play a little music? becuase this is really the only room where I can play, you know, without anyone nagging at me or anything.

    "Um, yea sure, you can get right started, stay as ong as you like, I just need to organize up the back and I'll be out!"
    "
    Thank you Dylan, you know, I think you as one of the people I can really trust and ask anything, and you wouldn't tell anyone"

    "Oh really?" He stopped shuffling and looked at Hayley with his deep, brown eyes.

    "Yea"

    "Thanks Hayley, I might be your teacher, but you're a really good friend!"

    "Ok, I'll get started now, thanks again" He didn't answer and simply started going through the papers again.

    "Na na, na na na, na na
    I miss you, miss you so bad
    I don't forget you, oh it's so sad
    I hope you can hear me
    I remember it clearly"

    She started playing her guitar while singing,

    "The day you slipped away
    Was the day I found it won't be the same
    Oh

    Na na na na na na na

    I didn't get around to kiss you
    Goodbye on the hand
    I wish that I could see you again
    I know that I can't

    Oh
    I hope you can hear me cause I remember it clearly

    The day you slipped away
    Was the day I found it won't be the same
    Oh

    I had my wake up
    Won't you wake up
    I keep asking why
    And I can't take it
    It wasn't fake
    It happened, you passed by

    Now you are gone, now you are gone
    There you go, there you go
    Somewhere I can't bring you back
    Now you are gone, now you are gone
    There you go, there you go,
    Somewhere you're not coming back

    The day you slipped away
    Was the day I found it won't be the same no..
    The day you slipped away
    Was the day that I found it won't be the same oh..."

    she stopped playing her guitar and sang soflty

    "Na na, na na na, na na
    I miss you"
    To Be Continued....
  2. bouncingbabyfig Well-Known Member

    I think this is fairly good, my only pointer is you don't have to be so detailed in your description and to check your work before posting...:sing: More please! Oh, I'm Figgie btw! :)
  3. Er, I just spellchecked my chapter 2 on word and stuff, and I had alot... I really wish there was someway to edit the first chapter, if anyone knows how... please, let me know!
  4. Thanks alot Figgie! I only was so detailed in my description because this was my first post ever on this sight, so I thought I'de tell everyone who I am :sing: I'll make sure to check my next chapter before posting next time :o:oops: Thanks for the pointers!:)

  5. Chapter Two: The Portal of Weirdness
    The light pink, orange haired bassist was looking at her straight in the eyes--eye, her bangs were covering up her left eye, and people could only see her right eye, green as a bright clover on a springtime morning. He was standing face to face with her; she could feel his light breathing on her neck. She glared back, except with a confused look on her face, was he real? Was this a dream? Was this reality? Then the bass player spoke.

    "Help" He didn't have any emotion in his face, or his tone.
    She tried to speak, but when she did, no sound came out, not even one little squeals.
    "Help Hayley" He started to look as if he was in pai--
    "HAYLEY GET UP NOW WE NEED TO HELP DYLAN!" She shot up like bullet coming from the firing of a gun, yet she was still asleep.
    "What?" I... Why does Floyd need help? We don't.... I... can't"
    "Hayley! Please get up!" She finally awoke to find her best friend, Kaytlin, aside her bed.
    "How in the heck did you get in here?"
    "Your mom let me in! But Hayley! Something's happened to Dylan!"
    "My mo--- Dylan?"
    "Yes! Our music teacher! I'll tell you on the way, just get up, NOW!" Hayley got up from her soft, feathery bed and began to get dressed...
    "Kaytlin?"
    "What!?" The tears in her eyes began to run down her cheeks, this must’ve been serious.
    "Can you look away while I get dres--"
    "We're in high school for goodness sake!"
    "You're right, I'm sorry" Hayley then began to start getting dresses in a tight pink top and blue skinny jeans, she got completely dressed and looked at Kaytlin.
    "Well, you ready?" Kaytlin asked her
    "I just have to brush my hair and grab my guit--"
    "Well hurry then!"
    "She ran to her mirror and began brushing her hair
    "You keep cutting me o--"
    "Ok, that's good; now get your guitar and come!" Hayley reached beside her bed and picked up the black, heavy guitar case, with a wooden electric guitar inside. They rushed out of the house and made sure to shut the door before running off, Hayley had not seen her mom that morning, thank goodness. She tried patiently fixing half her hair that had not been brushed, to make it look decent at least.
    ............
    Once they got to the area, Kaytlin looked around for the swirled mixture of lights that consisted of purple, pink and other vibrant colors.
    "Why isn't it here!?" She ran around in circles looking desperately.
    "What isn't here? you haven’t even told me what we're here for!"
    "Ok, well I was making my way over to your house, to see if you're awake or not, and to see well, if you wanted to hang out, since your mom doesn't allow any type of phones in your house... and I saw this giant swirling thing of purple! And pink! And other colors!" she panted heavily while softly shouting at Hayley all the... simple, details. "Ok and I saw Dylan, so I stopped to see what he was doing, and he got carried away or something by this... this portal of weirdness!" Hayley gave Kaytlin a really dumbfounded look. "Honest!"
    "You're probably seeing things, have you been eating to much skittles again? Do I need to recall what happened to the last time you had those skittles?"
    "No Hayley! Honest to God!" Tears started plummeting from her eyes.
    "Ok, Ok Kay, I believe you!" Hayley looked around the area "Well there is no ... portal of weirdness now, how did it appear?"
    "I don't know! I just ran by and saw it there!"
    "Well we have to rescue Dylan"
    "We HAVE to?" She smirked at Hayley a bit.
    "We should, I- I meant we should rescue him..." Hayley couldn't help feel her heart give a little jolt, maybe a ray of sunshine, just saying his name... A tear started coming from her eye, but her hair covered it up thank goodness, she hated crying, and she only did when it was a really sincere moment.
    "We might not get him back Hayley"
    "We will! I don't care what they say! We will get him back!" The tear began melting down her face; she could feel it run down her cheek.
    "Ok Hayley, I'll make sure of it too, he is our friend, and we can't just betray him like that"
    "Can we just sit and think for a second, of how to open the portal of weirdness that is?"
    "Of course Hayley" They both sat on two rocks and began to think, Hayley got out her guitar and started to strum it, her guitar always soothed her down.
    She began to strum faster, and louder, it got her really enthusiastic, she stood up and put her foot on the rock, while rocking out!
    Kaytlin just looked up at her in awe

    "It's the boy you never told I like you
    It's the girl you let get away
    It's the one you saw that day on the train
    But you freaked out and walked away

    It's the plane you wanna catch to Vegas
    Things you swear you'll do before you die
    It's the city of love that waits for you
    But you're too scared to fly

    Hit the lights, Let the music move you Lose yourself Tonight, Come alive Let the moment take you, Lose control Tonight Hit the lights, Let the music move you Lose yourself Tonight, Come alive Let the moment take you, Lose control Tonight
    It's the time that you totally screwed up Still you're trying get it out your brain
    It's the fight you had when you didn't make up
    It's the past that you're dying to change
    It's all the money the you're saving
    While the good life passes by
    It's all the dreams that never came true
    Cause you're too scared to try

    Hit the lights, Let the music move you Lose yourself Tonight Come alive Let the moment take you, Lose control Tonight Hit the lights, Let the music move you Lose yourself Tonight Come alive Let the moment take you, Lose control Tonight
    It's a mad, mad world,
    Gotta make an escape
    It's a perfect world,
    When you go all the way

    Hit the lights, Let the music move you Lose yourself Tonight So let's go, go, go, go All the way, Yeah let's go, go, go Night and day From the floor, To the rafters People raise your glasses We could dance forever Hit the lights, Let the music move you Lose yourself tonight, Come alive Let the moment take you, Lose control tonight Hit the lights, Let the music move you Lose yourself tonight, Come alive Let the moment take you, Lose control tonight"

    She began to go crazy, as if she were performing with Electric Mayhem.
    "Hayley" But she didn’t listen
    "Hayley look!" Hayley then stopped strumming and glared at Kaytlin.
    "What! I was in the mood!"
    "Wait, look right there, and strum your guitar as loud and hard as you can! You’ll see!"
    Hayley seemed really confused and played her guitar as loud as she could.
    There it stood
    In the middle of the field
    they looked with no emotion
    the purple
    the pink
    the hippie colors
    The Portal of Weirdness
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  6. bouncingbabyfig Well-Known Member

    Awsoooooome!! :)Do you write these songs yourself, cause that is fantastic! I didn't find any errors in this chapter.+;)
  7. Thank you! Sadly I dont write these songs, I just use songs that fit in with the chapter and put them in here, I wish I did though! This song was Hit the Lights by selena Gomez, the song in the last chapter was Slipped Away by Avril Lavigne. I'll update soon, I have the next chapter all ready, but I'll post it later :)
  8. bouncingbabyfig Well-Known Member

    in the great words of KTF: Yaaay! :)
  9. Hooray Hooray for Updates! :)

    Chapter 3: Finding Dylan ... Not Exactly
    Hayley and Kaytlin stopped and stared at the portal. They had named it "The Portal of Weirdness", because it was weird, and it looked like a portal. It was swirling with purple, pink and other hippie's colors, the wind was powerful. The wind coming from the portal was really forceful, it felt like it was blowing them away but sucking them in at the same time, they must stand their ground to be able to even stand there without moving, which was practically impossible not to move with these strong forces.
    "So, How will we get Dylan back here!?" Kaytlin had to shout to be able to even sound like a whisper. It was hard for Hayley to talk though, she was so quiet, and she hated shouting. She forced the strong words out of her mouth.
    "I don't know! We could call in and see if he's there!" she giggled at the thought of what that must've sounded like, she thought to herself, "he, he, like that would work, Dylan are you there! Yes Hayley I'm right here! And him just walking out of the portal like nothing happened, like that would happen."
    Sure enough, Kaytlin tried, she inched forward to the portal and screamed in,
    "Dylan! Are you in there!?" She waited hoping for an answer.
    Hayley to was hoping for the slight chance of him responding, just to say he's ok...
    "Hayley! I'm going in after him!"
    "What! Are you nuts!?" Hayley actually screamed so loud it sounded like someone screaming in front of her face to Kaytlin. With a big breath, Kaytlin soon enough jumped in to The Portal of Weirdness.
    "Oh my god, that lunatic!" Hayley then grabbed her guitar case, and of course her guitar, and went in to save Kaytlin, and hopefully to save Dylan.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~
    After traveling through time and space for awhile.
    Thump!
    Hayley landed right on top of Kaytlin, she got up after a millisecond though.
    "Hayley..... Hayley why do you look like that?"
    "Look like what?" Hayley then looked at her now, light blue felt hands. She began to worry, a lot, and she scanned the rest of herself, well her arms, legs and feet. The light blue felt covered her, and she was at least a foot smaller than usual. She now wore a floppy, light purple top and black jean, like what she had worn the day before. It's like the portal brought her back a day before, except with all the memory of that day. Kaytlin was now a purple color, and she wore a pink tight shirt with blue jeans.
    Hayley screamed. And boy did she give a loud scream, she screamed for about two minutes until her guitar case revealed from the portal and knocked her upside the back of her head, knocking her out.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    She was in a black room, sitting in a chair, she stood up and walked around until hearing a familiar voice,
    "Hayley" Said a screechy like voice, then out of the darkness came the thin, orange haired bass player in the band. Hayley thought to herself "Is this another dream again? If so, then why are they all about Floyd?"
    "Hayley! Who are you?" the redhead was now standing in front of Hayley.
    "I'm Hayley, you just said my name, so you obviously know who I am" she coughed a laugh and stood there looking at him.
    "Who am I?" he spoke in return
    ~~~~~~~~~~~
    "Like, who is she?"
    "I dunno, but I think she's wakin' up man"
    "Okay, everyone shhh! Give her some room!"
    Hayley was coming conscious, she felt a bit dizzy and light headed, like she had just been hit on the back of the head with a mallet. She once again, shot up panting.
    "Floyd!" she yelled, looking at the red, velvety couch she was lying on.
    "I'm right here man"
    Hayley looked at where the voice was coming from. It was him, Floyd Pepper.
    "Ugh, when will these dreams end!"
    "Be careful Hun, looks like you got competition! Hehehehehe" He snickered to himself while putting hid pink felted, red dressed arm around his blonde girlfriend.
    "Oh, rully"
    "Wait where am I?"
    "Hi ho, you're in our house, as in the muppets house!"
    "The muppets? Like Dr. Teeth?"
    The keyboardist in the flesh, well, felt stood up and sat in front of the couch.
    "Golden teeth, 'and golden tones, welcome to my presence!"
    She was speechless, just being in his presence of course, made her heart skip a beat and made her stomach have butterflies. He was amazing, his fluffy orange hair and his perfect smile; he was just... amazing
    she lost it and gave a little squeal. She then put both her hands over her mouth, looking very embarrassed, her face going red; she was trying so hard not to go to red, well purple maybe? She was blue now... the doctor just gave a little laugh and said,
    "So, you a fan?"
    She nodded ferociously as she gave a little "mhmmm!!!!!" He laughed again
    "She looked around for the rest of the band, but the green skinned doctor never left her mind.
    "Zoot?"
    "Huh? What? Is she awake? Did she survive?"
    "Yea man, she's right there, she looks like she's a little Zoot fan herself..." Floyd glared at Hayley "No?"
    "Yea, I love him." she paused, and then realizing what she just said, she almost screamed "I mean I love his music!" Zoot looked at her through his black shades and smiled.
    "Janice?"
    "Fer sure, rully"
    "Lips?"
    He had a little shock, him being the newest member of the band and all; he though not many people would know him
    "Hey"
    Hayley smiled at the yellow, shaggy haired trumpet player.
    "Animal?"
    "ANIMAL! ANIMAL! WO-MAN! WO-MAN!" The red haired crazed drummer yelled
    "Animal! Down!" Floyd was the only one who could keep Animal calm, or at least settled, for a second.
    "Down"
    "Sit!"
    "sit"
    "F-Floyd?" Hayley stuttered as she called for the bassist of the band.
    "Here man"
    "You've been in a lot of my dreams lately" Hayley told him, yes in front of everyone she just admitted that he'd been in her dreams.
    "Oh really man? Why? What did I say?"
    "I dunno, stuff like help, wake up, who are you? Who am I?"
    "Hmm"
    "WAIT! Where's Kaytlin!?"
    The light purple girl stepped from the crowd and sat on the couch
    "I thought you would never ask about me! Being with your favorite band and all! Oh yeah, here's your guitar Hayley" She handed the black, guitar shaped box to her. Hayley took it right away and put it in her lap.
    "Like, Kayt over here said that you can like, play guitar rully good"
    "Yea, I can play"
    "How 'boutcha play sumthin' for us?" The doctor requested.
    "Ok, but what?"
    "Anything" Said Kermit, smiling at her sweetly. That's when she got the idea.

    She started to strum her guitar and sing.

    "Why are there so many songs about rainbows
    and what's on the other side?
    Rainbows are visions, but only illusions,
    and rainbows have nothing to hide.
    So we've been told and some choose to believe it.
    I know they're wrong, wait and see.
    Someday we'll find it, the rainbow connection.
    The lovers, the dreamers, and me.

    Who said that every wish would be heard
    and answered when wished on the morning star?
    Somebody thought of that and someone believed it.
    Look what it's done so far.
    What's so amazing that keeps us star gazing
    and what do we think we might see?
    Someday we'll find it, the rainbow connection.
    The lovers, the dreamers, and me.

    All of us under its spell. We know that it's probably magic.

    Have you been half asleep and have you heard voices?
    I've heard them calling my name.
    Is this the sweet sound that called the young sailors?
    The voice might be one and the same.
    I've heard it too many times to ignore it.
    It's something that I'm supposed to be.
    Someday we'll find it, the rainbow connection.
    The lovers, the dreamers and me."

    Everyone cheered.
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  10. bouncingbabyfig Well-Known Member

    Ah ha! Like ruuully cool girl!:flirt: I like how you added the Rainbow connection, it added some sweetness to the story!:) So does Hayley like Dylan?:confused: Jus' a thought. Very well done! More?:halo:
  11. Thank you! Yea, I wasn't going to add Rainbow Connection, but I had no idea what song to put in ... Err,it's kinda hard to explain... and I don't wanna spoil stuff that might happen later in the story ;) I'll post up more in a sec :)
  12. Chapter 4: Mission- Make some Mayhem Happen!
    The electric guitarist strummed her guitar lightly, and sang softly:
    "If I die young, bury me in satin
    Lay me down on a, bed of roses
    Sink me in the river, at dawn
    Send me away with the words of a love song

    Uh oh, uh oh

    Lord make me a rainbow, I'll shine down on my mother
    She'll know I'm safe with you when she stands under my colors, oh well
    Life ain't always what you think it ought to be, no
    Ain't even grey, but she buries her baby

    The sharp knife of a short life, well
    I've had just enough time

    If I die young, bury me in satin
    Lay me down on a bed of roses
    Sink me in the river at dawn
    Send me away with the words of a love song

    The sharp knife of a short life, well
    I've had just enough time

    And I'll be wearing white, when I come into your kingdom
    I'm as green as the ring on my little cold finger,
    I've never known the lovin' of a man
    But it sure felt nice when he was holdin' my hand,
    There's a boy here in town, says he'll love me forever,
    Who would have thought forever could be severed by

    The sharp knife of a short life, well,
    I've had just enough time

    So put on your best boys and I'll wear my pearls
    What I never did is done

    A penny for my thoughts, oh no, I'll sell 'em for a dollar
    They're worth so much more after I'm a goner
    And maybe then you'll hear the words I been singin'
    Funny when you're dead how people start listenin'

    If I die young, bury me in satin
    Lay me down on a bed of roses
    Sink me in the river at dawn
    Send me away with the words of a love song

    Uh oh
    The ballad of a dove
    Go with peace and love
    Gather up your tears; keep 'em in your pocket
    Save 'em for a time when you're really gonna need 'em, oh

    The sharp knife of a short life, well
    I've had just enough time

    So put on your best boys and I'll wear my pearls"

    "Like, wow Hayley that was like, rully good" Said a blonde haired band member.
    "Thanks Janice!" Janice and Hayley were like best friends now, and hung out whenever Hayley wasn't with Kaytlin. Kaytlin was off talking to some other muppets.
    "So are you gunna like, go and find that boy today?" Janice asked while sitting on a big pile of pillows on her bed.
    "Dylan? Yea I think so, Kaytlin and I are going soon" She looked at the round yellow, pink and purple clock; it was 1:47.
    "Rully, rully"
    "So, are we going now?" A light, cheerful voice popped in the room, it was Kaytlin. She smiled at Hayley.
    "Yea, Janice do you want to come with us?"
    "Nah, I'll like, stay here and make sure the band keeps organized, rully" She laughed a bit.
    "If you say so" The light blue muppet stood up and brushed dust off her black, torn up jeans. She grabbed her guitar and headed out the door
    "Kermit, we're going to go and find Dylan!" Then Kaytlin closed the door and caught up with Hayley.
    "Do you really think that we're going to find him? We don't know how big this world... dimension thing is, and he could be anywhere Hayley"
    A green felt, shaggy, black haired muppet raised his head. He sat in a dark alley where he could continue to be confused. The muppet recognized the name Hayley.
    "I know Kaytlin, but we have to find him" The green muppet stood up and ran out of the alley, over to them, his black sneakers hitting the ground with every step. He ran up and hugged them from behind
    "AHH, RAPIST!" Kaytlin screamed while Hayley screamed thief. A familiar voice spoke from behind them
    "I'm so happy to see you guys!" Hayley and Kaytlin looked at each other and smiled big, like the Cheshire cat.
    "DYLAN!" They both turned around quickly and hugged him back. Hayley's face went red-- err, purple I guess, maybe a blueish red? Dylan on the other hand, his face went a pink color, greenish pink? Hayley's face didn't stay that color for long, maybe for a split second and went back normal, but he stayed for awhile.
    "So how'd you get here?" Dylan asked
    "We rode on a magical flying lion that talks, we meant to go to Pigfarts but ended up coming here" Kaytlin sighed and looked up at Dylan who was giving her a confused look, and then he laughed, a lot. Kaytlin joined in and soon so did Hayley,
    "Same way you did dumbo" Hayley told Dylan while giving him a light punch.
    "So... why'd you go into the portal?"
    "Well, the bright colors memorized me and I flew in"
    "Oh, ok, now why'd you really?"
    Dylan snickered and said the truth "It appeared out of no where, I just happened to be standing there and it pulled me in"
    "Hmm, interesting" Kaytlin said, in a Sherlock Holmes like voice
    "Not really" Dylan snapped back
    "Anyways, let’s head back to the house"
    "The house, you guys moved in to this town?"
    "No, some of the muppets offered to share their house until we leave, hopefully soon"
    "Ok"
    They started heading back to the house
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    "Kermit!" Kaytlin yelled as soon as they walked in the door
    "Come on Dylan, I'll show you where my room is" Hayley grabbed his hand and led him to Electric Mayhem's room
    "There was only one more spot in this room, so they let me stay here" They walked in the room and saw all the members just sitting there. Zoot was sleeping with his sax, Floyd and Janice were sitting together, Lips was sitting beside Zoot, Animal was in his cardboard box chewing on something, It was in his mouth so she couldn't tell; Dr. Teeth was just sitting down, looking around.
    "I... I was just... I thought you guys had a gig?"
    "Like yea but they like, called and like, told us that like--"
    "They called and told us they got another band to play..."
    Everyone in the band hung there head, Floyd put his arm around the blonde lead guitarist and lifted his head "They said we are childish and shouldn't be a band"
    "Oh my- I... I'm sorry, they are just stupid, they probably never listened to you guys, I know so many people who love your music, they all look up to you, you guys are actually why I want to become a musician..."
    They all lifted their heads, except for Zoot, he was still asleep. Their spirits were raised and they knew she was right. "Well this is my friend Dylan, he's my music teacher, and my friend" Hayley looked at the black haired guy standing next to her and smiled sweetly.
    "Come on Dylan, lets go, I want to show you something" Hayley grabbed his hand and dragged him out.
    "She's a nice kid" Said the yellow, shaggy haired trumpet player
    "Rully" Replied Janice
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    "Hey Kermit, can I ask you something?" Hayley walked up to Kermit and Kaytlin, they both looked at her and Dylan.
    "Hey Hayley, what do ya want?" The green frog asked
    "You know how the band got turned down?"
    "They did? Why?"
    "The place's owner said they found another band, and called them childish"
    "Childish? Ha, yah right, how old's Zoot again?" Hayley scowled and rolled her eyes,
    "Well I was wondering if we could do something that would make them feel better"
    "Like what?"
    "Well, I was thinking we could make the theatre all decorated with bright lights and stuff, and put on a concert, we could invite lots of people and--"
    "But wouldn't that take lots of time and work?"
    "Well if the whole gang helped out, we could get it done by..." Shy looked at the clock that just happened to be right there on the wall, it was now 4:04 "We could get it done by 7, some could be working on the stage, others could be handing out fliers and stuff to people"
    "Sound like a good idea, but how will we all leave without them knowing?"
    "That part I haven't thought of, they would get a tad suspicious when everyone is gone..."
    "Hayley, Dylan and I could distract them while you guys go and work on it, and some people could leave for the stage first, and some people stay here. Then when the stage is done, the rest can go and find people to come" Suggested Kaytlin.
    "Ok, you guys go and distract them somehow, I'll spread the news around, leave it to me" Kermit gave a big smile and strutted out of the room.
    "Ok, let’s go and, well, distract!"
    The three of them walked into the band's room
    "Hey peoples!" Shouted Kaytlin
    The band wasn't there. But where could they possibly be? Hayley ran back down to the first floor, "Kermit!"
    "Hi, ho! Hayley, I got the first team for the stage, we were just about to leave"
    "But the band’s gone!"
    Kermit gulped, "But where could they be? They got rejected remember!"
    "I don't know! But you can't go unless we know where they are..." Hayley panicked
    "Maybe they're at the theatre, did they leave a note? They usually do..." Hayley ran up to their room and searched the mess. She did find a piece of paper, it said: We're out at the van if you're reading this.
    "Are you serious? I just panicked for nothing" She ran back down to Kermit, Kaytlin and Dylan.
    "I found a piece of scrap paper that said they're out in their van"
    "Ok, go distract them... in the van" The green frog slipped away from the group and faced he large crowd of dogs and bears and chickens and whatever, "Okay troops! Let's head to the theatre! Got the supplies?" Varies yes’ and nods came from the crowd. They marched out the front doors of the two story building.
    The three friends went out to the van and knocked on the door. Dr. Teeth came and opened the colored van doors,
    "Can we give you our services?
    "Yea, we were looking for you, why are you out in the van? Also, why didn't you tell anyone anyways?"
    The orange haired, pinkish purplish bass player stepped from the inside to the front,
    "Because--" The doctor got cut off
    "Because we didn't want to be bothered"
    Hayley gave a hurt look; Dylan looked at her then looked at Floyd with an angry face,
    "Hey buster, no need to be so mean, if you wanted some privacy with you and your so called band--"
    "Dylan! Knock it off! Hayley screamed at him. She looked at Floyd, then looked at Dr. Teeth, "Sorry for interrupting, we'll leave" She turned and grabbed Dylan's hand and left, knocking him on the head with her other hand
    Kaytlin looked at them leave, quickly looked at Floyd and said, "Sorry" Then she ran off to catch up to her two friends.
    "Hey man! what was that!?" Dr. Teeth scolded Floyd, "You deserve a head knocking too!" Then hit him on the head.
    ~~~~~~~~~
    It was two hours later and Kermit and the gang showed up back at the house,
    "We finally got the stage done, the rest of them can go and invite people... wait, why aren't you guys with Electric Mayhem?"
    "They said they were in the van because they didn't want to be interrupted" Kaytlin said while looking at Hayley.
    "Oh, well I'll get the other muppets to go and invite people, and then we can bring them to the stage."
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    It was time to get Electric Mayhem to the theatre, the stage was ready, the audience was there, it was 6:40, and they just had to get the band to the theatre.
    There was a knocking on the van's door again.
    "Band! Open up vous... disgusting... van! 'Tis moi!" The sweet voice yelled from the outside as she wiped her hand on her light pink, lacey dress.
    "What do you want bacon bits? Hehehehehe..." the bassist, Floyd Pepper, opened the van door looking at the pink, blonde haired pig.
    "My Kermie has asked moi, to ask vous to meet us at the theatre! He said that everyone will be there, he also told moi there was a surprise pour vous!" A stern look crept upon her face, "So don't be late, got it?"
    "Err, we'll be there pig, so hold your horses" he calmly walked back into the bus.
    "Mission accomplished" The pig walked towards the theatre, where the frog of her dreams was waiting for her!
  13. We Got Us Active Member

    First of all: >>hugs<< (and I am NOT a rapist ;)) for starting this story. Oh, how much you make me realize I was not as talented as I thought when I was your age...you have a wonderfully smooth style. Haley and Kaytlin are believable (is she based off of you?) >>hugs for writing (or being) an obsessed Dr. Teeth lover<< He just doesn't get enough, you know it? I get the sneaking suspicion there's a fan-crush involved somewhere....but, no judgment here....>hugs and kisses Scooter doll< Like Figgie said, edit carefully, especially for punctuation, make sure the whole thing reads smoothly, and keep the plot nice and clean. I'm honestly kinda a fan of putting people in their own stories (call me insane)...so long as they aren't doing it to smooch Scooter....:mad:...I'm getting weird here. All I'm saying is, your off to a neat start and I think the idea is original and cute, enjoy your first fic!
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  14. Thank you so much! Hayley wasn't really based off of me, but Kaytlin was based off of my best friend Caitlin :) I'll make sure to check the puncuation more, thanks for the pointer! Yea, I'm a Dr. Teeth fan :D but he's not my favourite... >Looks over at giant Floyd poster< Err... ANYWAYS! I'm actually not much of a writer, I'm more of an artist! My friend Caitlin is the writer, she's the same age as me but she's AMAZING... I love writing fan-fics about muppets, but I'm bad at writing... then I started reading other fics and found out what I needed to do to become a better writer, so I did, I thought my fic was good so I posted this and I'm glad I did... Sorry for saying my (sortof) life story :oops: I tend to do that sometimes.. :o
  15. We Got Us Active Member

    LOL! So do I dear, so do I. You and Caitlin sound pretty tight...kinda like me and Figge....>winks up at Figgie< And hey, you are NOT bad at writing. Practice makes perfect so keep it up! I can't wait to see where the story is going. It's got a lot of heart and a healthy fan-craze to it. Bravo!
  16. bouncingbabyfig Well-Known Member

    >winks back at Wiggie< Everyone has their own style, and it gives a new perspective to the world of writing. No worries, you grow from these experiences. Listen to me, I'm starting to sound like an old wise woman! *waves cane and hubbles off*:jim:
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  17. Yea, me and Caitlin are, we're Bffls... And thank you! The next chapter is (hopefully) going to be pretty...um... whats the word... shocking? uh, I don't know the word I'm looking for... Thank you! I am only young so I have alot of years to practice... The next chapter should be up by tonight! If not then tomorrow for sure!
  18. We Got Us Active Member

    You and Lisa. Old before your time. Sad really. ;) >hugs Scooter doll tight and waits for shocking chapter<<
  19. It might be awhile untill I update because I have my unit test in science on Tuesday... So I'll try to post another chapter before wednesday or so. :)
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