Hee... It's always great to find a new piece of yer writings Red. You've been getting lessons from the Queen and other followers about breakin' peoples hearts with the scene/flashback where Red chose Gobo to be the sacrifice so she could continue her ascention. The exchange between the general and captain reminds me much of the filler scenes from later seasons' episodes of Farscape, where we'd get backstage glimpses at the strings being pulled to bring about scheming machinations. The scene at the bar between Erin and World's Oldest was fun... And yet, I know that tone in Scorpius's dialogue. He's already planning something or will be once Erin gets him the lo'down on the ditzies. Interested to see how the Underground Power Trio's doing in the meantime... Thanks and hope to read more soon.