Fan-Fiction: The Revenge of Elmo

[theprawncracker]

Sheesh. Well thanks guys. I'm trying to forget this story... but I'm glad you liked it.

 

[ErnieBertGonzo]

Where's Luis?

Chapter 12: Strike Back

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"I want to go with the hotty. Hokay!" Pepe shouted as he ran over to Maria.

"Please, I'm married!" Maria told him.

"That's hokay, we'll date in private!" Pepe said.

Speaking of which, as much as I hate to be nitpicky, and you don't have to respond, but was Luis on leave or something?

 

[theprawncracker]

Speaking of which, as much as I hate to be nitpicky, and you don't have to respond, but was Luis on leave or something?

*scratches head* That's a good question. Well... after a quick CNTRL+F search in my Word document with the story in it... yeah, he was on vacation, I guess. You can't hold me to anything I did back in '05. I was young, naive, and rather annoying. But excluding Luis is just unforgivable!

 

[ErnieBertGonzo]

*scratches head* That's a good question. Well... after a quick CNTRL+F search in my Word document with the story in it... yeah, he was on vacation, I guess. You can't hold me to anything I did back in '05. I was young, naive, and rather annoying. But excluding Luis is just unforgivable!

Don't worry. Like ol' Big Bird says: "Everyone makes mistakes!"

 

[ZeppoAndFriends]

Why are you trying to forget about it? It's a pretty good story! Though I did spot a slight mistake in the fact that Grover doesn't use contractions. But, other than that, it was great!