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How I Spent My Summer Vacation (A Muppet Fic)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by charlietheowl, Jan 13, 2012.

  1. LipsGF4Life

    LipsGF4Life Well-Known Member

    That was awsome!
     
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  2. Slackbot

    Slackbot Well-Known Member

    *chuckles. Nice work. I really like what you did in this fic. Sweetums at college was a fun idea. I can just see him taking notes, carefully holding a pencil that is the size of a toothpick in his massive fingers. Nice wrap-up. I imagined it as an end-od-summer party, with the camera wandering around and catching little bits and snatches of conversation.

    Welcome to the Finished Fics club! May there be many more.
     
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  3. charlietheowl

    charlietheowl Well-Known Member

    Thanks guys!

    I wanted to go for that sort of feeling for the last chapter, sort of like a closing credits to a movie or something, with the music playing and the camera panning around, lingering on the ever-silent Lips for the last shot, hahaha.
     
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  4. newsmanfan

    newsmanfan Well-Known Member

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    And your dialogue there was so spot-on I could identify EVERY character without dialogue tags! LOL Well done!!

    Lowly Worm as Trotsky?? Then who's Lenin? The cat? And where does Che fit in??

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  5. charlietheowl

    charlietheowl Well-Known Member

    Thank you! I'm not versed enough in Scarry critique to figure out all the matches, but look out for Sweetums' thesis A Post-Modern Critique in Busytown's Economy: How The Worm Can Rise out of the Apple.
     
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  6. WebMistressGina

    WebMistressGina Well-Known Member

    OMG Charlie what a great ending! And THANK YOU! I've been trying to learn the name of the band who does this song, cause I happen to enjoy it, and I had no idea it was War. Another reason to like them.

    Definitely a great first foray! I'll look for more of your stuff!
     
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  7. charlietheowl

    charlietheowl Well-Known Member

    I'm glad I could help you with your song search, hahaha! That's definitely one of their best songs.

    Thanks for reading!
     
  8. Ruahnna

    Ruahnna Well-Known Member

    Lovely work, dear. You did a very nice ensemble piece, which is where the muppets really shine. And yes--welcome to the Finished Fics Club. We meet every other whenever and whine incessantly about the fics we haven't finished....

    Sorry I missed the actual party, but I sure am glad I didn't miss the actual story. Bravo, sweetie.
     
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  9. charlietheowl

    charlietheowl Well-Known Member

    Thank you!
     


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