Yep, definatly time for a detailed reveiw, since I enjoy them, I'm sure others do too. Yes, thats 12, 12 vonderfull chapters already! Yet each has been such delightfull reading it hardly seems possible we can have come so far. Can there only be the 10 and the final Goblem-Queen fight? I wonder.... Ah, brillient. That first sentence is just filled with the style of your stories. The kind I can hear being read in the slow spooky narrator's voice. Also, it's good how you re-cap that he's reclaiming the castle. And neither did I! But I certainly love it. I can picture it all happening! Yes, our hero certainly is cool as a cat. And, speaking of cat's... Brillient! Just what we need. Evil cats are so....pictuesque! Purrrrrrrfect use of puns, as ever. Indeed who was this? Will we ever know... Oh, I wasn't expecting that. When he fell it was certainly a breath-caught in throat moment. Phew! He made it! But, was he transported out of harm's way....or into it! Can't wait to find out!!!