Hey guys, I know three days after joining is really soon to start posting fan-fics, but this is just a silly story I started writing for my many little sisters and cousins back in 2008, when I was 13. It has it's OK moments and it's not-so-great moments, and eventually I wrote myself into a nice ol' corner. The idea was an excuse to write a book about Muppets on a cruise ship/island since that was the only setting I hadn't seen them on (before I watched Treasure Island) but young cousins who were never satisfied with just Muppets begged for 'cameos' by their favorite characters, leading to random appearances of everyone from Jack Sparrow to Darth Vader for me to try and write in. Like I said, eventually the Scooby-dooish plot ran itself dry, but now they have rediscovered it and want more so what I'm asking for is a little honest judgment...what does it need, does it work (for kids mostly) and how in the world do I get out of any more ridiculous cameos? I would appreciate feedback greatly. Thanks!