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FanFic: A Grand Adventure In Life!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by ReneeLouvier, Feb 27, 2006.

  1. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Hexcellent. More back story connecting everything... So well done, and the scene with the Muppeteers was a definite highlight. More whenever it's ready... Please?
  2. ReneeLouvier

    ReneeLouvier Active Member

    Chapter Fifty

    "So what do you have to say for yourself, Biff?" Doc asked, looking down at him.

    "..I...I..." He stammered, so tired and mentally exhausted now. He looked over at Kermit, and he sighed. "..I'm sorry...Kermit."

    "Don't say you're sorry to me. You should tell Richard...and Jim." He frowned softly, as he grabbed a chair and sat down. "You've done a thing to me, but you have tried to harm my friends. Make amends to Sara and Scooter, then we'll take you to the cemetary. Their both buried in Hensonville's cemetary around here."

    Biff blanched at the thought of having to face what he had done. He just wanted to lie that he was sorry, get back to his own time, and start scamming people who just simply didn't know any better. Emmett stepped away from Biff, frowning. He shook his head, watching Biff closely.

    "Are you sure this is going to work Kermit?" Doc whispered to the old frog, who was watching Biff intently. "I mean...I don't think he's telling us the truth! He's never been this cooperative before!"

    "He knows something that we don't know. We need to get it out of him." Kermit remarked, as he heard the upper door open. Sadie was standing at the top of the stairs, with Scooter and Skeeter behind her. She came down the stairs, absolutely livid now.

    She was shaking her head, she couldn't even speak she was so angry just then. Her fists were balled, and she walked over to Biff, and glared at him. She was easily half his height, and 3 times lighter then him. She reared back and punched him across his face, and it sent him reeling.

    "YOU DID THAT!! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU!!!" She leapt ontop of him, and starting punching away at his face and upper body, angry as everything. "YOU KILLED RICHARD!!! YOU'RE THE ONE WHO KILLED HIM!!!!"

    Scooter reached forward and grabbed his mother quickly, pulling her off of him. He knew she was going to punch him, but not go insane at him. She was sobbing loudly in his arms, struggling hard to get loose from him. His cold body helped calm her down a bit, she was getting overheated because of her anger.

    "What...what is the matter with you broads!! I get kicked in the head by that stupid snoop, then you go postively insane!!!" He rubbed his face, and glared at her, seething at the pain now.

    She choked back a few sobs, then she wriggled out of her son's arms, and just held onto him. She was trembling now. "..R..Richard...he..." She couldn't say much else, but Biff kept staring at her, angry.

    "..What about him?" He asked, plaintively.

    "He was my husband." She said simply, her face halfway buried into Scooter's chest now. He held her close, as she was still sniffling and crying, he gently took her glasses off, and handed her a hankerchief.

    Biff just stared at her, frowning. 'A muppet...and...a human? Wait...Scooter and that snoop...they're together."
  3. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Yeah... And it took Sadie going postal on him to figure that out? OK boys... Just don't let go of him till he's faced up to what he's done and visited the cemetary.

    Kermit, we put our trust in you... And Sara to keep telling us about how this ends up.
  4. ReneeLouvier

    ReneeLouvier Active Member

    In my mind, Biff makes Link look smart sometimes. XD
  5. ReneeLouvier

    ReneeLouvier Active Member

    Chapter Fifty One

    For safety measures, Brown handcuffed Biff, as they walked out towards the bus. Sara and Renee were already sitting in it, with Scooter and Skeeter in front of them. Renee was kinda bored, then she saw Biff walk unsteadily onto the bus, being pushed by Emmett Brown.

    "What did he do, Mom? Why is he handcuffed like that?" She asked, turning around in the seat to watch him. "He wasn't that dangrous when I saw him."

    Skeeter turned around and frowned softly. "Well, looks can be decieving, Rey. He's going to and talk to Grampa today." She then looked up at Biff and got a slight sour look on her face. "And he's going to apologize for what he did."

    Biff muttered something, but a glare from Sadie as she stepped onto the bus, with Kevin holding her arm shut him up. Clifford was right behind the two, with Kermit beside him.

    "That's everyone, Kerm. I'll drive, 'kay?" Clifford said, taking the driver's seat, his hand on the door closer.

    "Oh, good Clifford. We're going to Hensonville Cemetary, alright?"

    "Right, Kermit." He closed the doors, and started the bus up. Kevin sat beside Sadie, and leaned his head against the window.

    "Been a long time since we've visited Gramps, huh?" Kevin remarked, watching the clouds pass by slowly in the sky as they drove along the road. Sadie merely nodded, and kept one hand in Kevin's strong grip. He looked down at Sadie. "Hey, Gramma. You wanna stop and get some flowers or something?" He asked softly. She shook her head a little.

    "This isn't really...the time for flowers, Kevin dear." She seemed to not really be there at the moment. She didn't like going to the cemetary too much. Especially not today. She felt like standing up and just killing Biff for what he had put Richard through. It broke her heart everytime she remembered seeing him like that.

    "I understand Gramma." He felt her shift a little bit, and he let go of her hand a little bit, and leaned back against the seat, listening to the rumbling of the bus.

    Renee was watching out the window as well, and she frowned. "Whoa! Hey...the cemetarys there, Uncle Clifford!!" She pointed out the window quickly, and he stopped the bus, and backed up carefully. There was nothing there, just tilled over land and some stumps of trees.

    "Where's the cemetary then?" Clifford asked no one in particular as he stared out the window. He saw a construction worker walk up to the bus and he rapped the side of it.

    "Yeah, yeah!" Clifford pointed at the worker who had just rapped on the side of the bus. "Yeah, you! What's happened to the cemetary man!?"

    "Tilled it over for business property. Graves were sinking more then normal sir. Had to move 'em. He replied about to turn back around to go to the site once more.

    "Hey! I ain't done talking to you man!!" He opened the bus, and started to walk out of it, he got around to the front, and the large man stared down at him, frowning. "Where's the new cemetary then?"

    Sadie just stared out the window at the ground. She saw one large stump near the middle of it. Richard's grave was underneath that tree, before. She sighed, watching them both, with weary eyes and a tired soul.

    "Ain't got it yet, old man. We're aiming for land near that theatre up aways yonder. But we ain't got it yet. Keeping the coffins and ashes in that truck over 'dere." He jabbed his thumb in the direction of a large truck, that had one last coffin loaded into it as Clifford watched.

    "....This JUST happened!? Who...who cordined it!?" He was getting a bit angry now.

    "Don't have a heart attack, sir. Geez. You'd think we're not in our rights or something." He reached into his pocket and pulled out a sheet of folded of paper, then he handed it to Clifford who read it quickly. He threw it onto the ground then.

    "**** DENAYS IS IN ON THIS!!?" He started back towards the bus. He got onto it, and slammed the door shut. He started up the bus, and backed up, going towards the business district of Hensonville. "Dang....Denays thinks he can just butt in and get every little thing he sinks his claws into....freaking...."

    Skeeter moved up to the front most seat, and leaned over to say something to Clifford. But instead he waved his hand at her and frowned. "I'm betting you...I'm betting ya, he's related to that **** Eli Takashi too!! They seem to both be in the 'I'm a demon, gonna ruin yo life' business!!"

    Skeeter shook her head, and sighed. "Hon, calm down, you're gonna have a connipiation if you're careful."

    "Have a connipation! I'll show that Denays a connipation when I get ahold o'him!!" He was furious now.

    Sadie sighed, and leaned against Kevin as Clifford finally got to Denays local corporation and parked the car. They looked up at the tall building and Clifford was ready to give him a piece of his mind. He had sat back too long he thought..
  6. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Hmmm... Not sure what Clifford thinks he can accomplish... Setting us up for the confrontation are you Renee?
    Grab on to whatever stuffed toy you have handy, it's getting to the climax I fear.
  7. Muppet Newsgirl

    Muppet Newsgirl Active Member

    Holy moly...so that's what happened to Scooter and Skeeter's father. And I've had a hunch that Richard was Sadie's husband, and that he was probably murdered.

    I'd like to see Jim and Richard's ghosts appear and give Biff a piece of their minds.
  8. redBoobergurl

    redBoobergurl Well-Known Member

    I love the stuff with the Muppeteers! It's great and it's adding a whole new element to the story! And I love that you have Richard married to Sadie! And as Ed says, I believe the climax is coming, but I'm ready and I can handle it so bring it on! Great work again Sara!
  9. ReneeLouvier

    ReneeLouvier Active Member

    Chapter Fifty Two

    Clifford pulled up to the large building, and he scowled getting out. He turned back to everyone else, and he rapped on the bus.

    "Come on. We're gonna go and talk to Mr. Denays about all this." He sneered lightly. "He's put my family through too much stuff, and I'm not going to be taking this lying down!!"

    Sara stepped off of the bus, and she sighed. "Cliff. I know you want to fight for all of us, your family and all....but...I don't think it'll be a fair fight."

    "Fair fight?" He did a double-take at Sara, then frowned. "I can't believe you. His goons paid to off Richard and Jim, then Denays himself tried to put you away twice, and also tried to take Renee away from ya. I mean.....why arn't you angry at them?"

    "I worry for everyone, and...I just don't want to fight him anymore, Clifford. I just don't feel like it." She sat back on the seat, and sighed softly, shaking her head.

    "Okay, Sara. You stay here then. I'll whup his *** for you." He said quite honestly, as he started towards the building's entrence. Skeeter started to say something, and she just sighed, starting to follow him as well.

    "Skeeter? You're going with him?" Scooter asked, then did a double-take himself, when he saw Kevin standing up to go with his mother.

    "He's my husband. Plus...in a way he's the one who killed you, I feel like whopping his butt too."

    Within a few minutes everyone had actually gone inside the building, and were heading up towards the top floor, where Denays' offices were. The tall double doors opened up, and they walked inside.

    "Denays! I got a bone to pick with you!" Clifford said loudly into the somewhat empty room. He saw the large chair sitting behind the desk. It slowly turned around, and a younger man was seen sitting there. He had black hair. And a sinister smile upon his face.
  10. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Yeah, yeah... And is this young man Denays? And... What means of time travel did he use to remain so young? Or is that part of his, um, persona?
    Looking for more when it's ready.
  11. Muppet Newsgirl

    Muppet Newsgirl Active Member

    Maybe he's a vampire (one of the truly nasty kind, that is, not the nice kind like the Count). Or maybe he's got a portrait of his older, wizened self hanging up somewhere, a la Dorian Gray.
  12. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Or maybe... Just maybe... He heard about the possibility of separating a piece of his soul after commiting murder, and casting that piece of his soul into some trophy thus creating a horcrux.
  13. redBoobergurl

    redBoobergurl Well-Known Member

    Ack! You can't leave us hanging there! What's going to happen now! And I want to give a standing ovation to Clifford and Skeeter for wanting to pound this Denays guy. I'm anxious to see just who he is too. So please, post more when you can, this is a cliffhanger!
  14. ReneeLouvier

    ReneeLouvier Active Member

    Chapter Fifty Three

    A familiar smell hung in the air, as the black haired man smiled at them. He stood up and walked over to Clifford, and he smiled softly.

    "What's the matter sir? I believe you've got the wrong office. I'm not Mr. Denays." He said silkily, as he pulled out a slim silver case from his pocket. He pulled out a cigarette and lit it, smirking softly.

    Sadie, who was already holding Scooter's hand, she gripped it tightly all of a sudden, causing him to look back at her. She was frozen, her thoughts racing.

    "Mom? Is something wrong?" Scooter whispered, as Sadie was trying to back away now, towards the door. He kept a tight hold on her hand, gentle but firm.

    "A shame you haven't been able to meet Mr. Denays, Clifford. Poor man had a heart attack about an hour ago..." He flexed his right hand, grinning like a cheshire cat now. His long fingernails could be easily seen now. "So...I had to take care of some old business here."

    "YOU!?" Skeeter suddenly exclaimed, it fully hitting her just who he was. "We thought....we thought you had DIED!!!"

    He laughed a bit, and sat on the desk, carelessly pushing over some items on the desk. "Oh, I had, dear Skeeter. But my Father has passed on the torch....or should I say sycthe, to me now."

    He grinned as the sycthe popped into his hands, and he smiled broadly. He had a cruel, cold smile on his face. "You see...you stupid muppets....you've been in my way, all these years. You've stopped me from my one goal."

    Kermit frowned stepping up in front of everyone else, he was so angry now. "What is it Eli! Why do you keep attacking us!! Why do you cause harm to everyone you see!?!?"

    "Dear stupid frog...I'm Death's spectre...." He got no response from Kermit or anyone else, and he frowned a little bit. "Geezus....I'm the Angel of Death!!"

    Everyone then nodded, understanding it completely now. Renee walked over to him, glaring hard at him.

    "You're quite an evil man, Mr. Takashi..." She said icily, she felt like trying to hurt him.

    He suddenly grasped her arm, pulling her towards him. His voice was icy, and sauve sounding. "A firecracker, huh? You've got quite a mouth on you, Renee Grosse. Just like your Grandmother..." He then threw her across the room, frowning deeply. "....I should have killed Sadie when I first met her."

    Sadie stared at him, stunned. "...I never met you until I worked at the Hensonville Observer..."

    He held up a hand, and smiled. "You don't remember me then...from when you had first met Richard...he was a dear friend of mine.."

    "Dear friend!? Then why did you kill him!?" She shot back, somewhere between crying and feeling like ripping her hair out from frustration.

    "I was told, by an old old friend of mine, that my plans would be thwarted by the Grosse family line. I didn't know who it was, so I had planned to just find the Grosse family, and simply kill them off. No contact, just simple nameless killing. Easy enough. But then, before I could find your darned family, Richard had to go and get together with you." He sneered glaring down at Sadie now.

    "A Grosse." He frowned and walked back over to the desk, gripping the side of it lightly. "He had told me you two had just gotten married and all this stuff. I then figured, just kill you off....be done with it!!"

    "But....DARN BIFF THERE HAD TO MESS IT UP!! He killed Jim...instead of you. Then he went back to try to kill you once more, and he ended up getting to Richard. I didn't know what else to do. I hated to see Richard die like that, but I had no choice....I then thought...okay, her husband's dead. I'll just get Sadie and it's all done with."

    "But I was pregnant with them, when he died." She said softly, her face expressionless now.

    He sighed, and cradled his head in his hands. His inner demons were torturing him once more. "Yes....but...I had and still have some limits. I would never harm a pregnant woman, or babies...."

    "What about me then!?" Sara shouted, getting right up to him. "I was pregnant when Biff pulled that gun on me!!"

    "That was Denays doing! Not me!! I merely ended up here, because I was reaping his soul an hour ago."

    "Then why are you still here, Eli?" Scooter asked, frowning now.

    "I knew you were coming." He looked down, and then lit another cigarette, frowning. "I...merely was going to do what I'm doing now, and then leave."

    Skeeter noticed the sudden change in attitude from Eli. He was abnoxious and cruel, now he sounded like some pitiful child, seeking acceptence from someone he knew he had done wrong too. She shook her head, and looked away from him.

    "You don't intend to harm us?" Kermit asked softly, feeling a little concerned for everyone else's wellbeing. They were in the room with a volitaile, bi-polar, demon hellspawn of course.

    Eli shook his head. "No. I'd had my chance to....rule this world. But it's passed now. I just stayed to admit my wrongdoings, and to warn you --- Do not mess with things you know not of."

    He looked directly at Emmett, and he smirked a little bit. Then with that, in a blaze of black flame and smoke, like his father, Death; he was gone in an instant.

    They left Denays, and drove back towards the boarding house sullen and tired.

    -----------

    Doc got into the DeLeoran, and he frowned at them for a second. "Are you sure you're going to be alright?"

    "Sure, Emmett. We'll be fine. Just enjoy your life, and...promise me you'll destroy it when you get back?" Kermit said, smirking a bit.

    "Certainly Kermit. I promise you I will do that." He looked over at Scooter and Sara, and he smiled. "I hope all of you have a wonderful....er....life."

    "You too, Emmett!" Sadie told him, as she gave him a quick hug, as he started to close the door. She stopped him for a second. "Emmett??"

    "Yes, Sadie?" He asked.

    "...Could you...warn Richard?" She said very softly, looking down at her hands for a second. "I..know it would be...tampering with the future and all...but please?"

    He frowned softly, and slipped the shades onto his head quickly. "I'll think about it Sadie. I can't make you any promises, alright?"

    "I understand, Emmett. I hope you have a great trip then." She smiled, and walked back over to her family, and she smiled at him.

    He flipped the shades back on, and closed the doors. He looked beside him, and saw the handcuffed, gagged Biff Tannen in the passenger's seat. He nodded affriming what he thought was the right readout, then he revved up the DeLeoran and took flight, zooming back into his own timeline, once and for all.

    He didn't intend to change history any, of course, but he would try to slip a few suggestions the next time he saw his old friend.

    ------------------

    The cemetary was finally being finished with the relocating, and they were unloading some of the coffins back into the ground once more.

    Sadie stood by Richard's new grave, and watched sadly as it was lowered into it's new and final resting place. Scooter and Skeeter stood behind her, watching as well.

    The ground was fresh, and Sadie sighed softly. "I'll always miss you, Richard. I'll never forget you.."

    She gently laid a small bouqet of roses on the grave, then they walked away. The rain started to drizzle a bit more, as they slowly made their way back to the car. She stopped and smiled softly, looking upwards towards the heavens.

    She knew that was Richard...and he was crying with laughter.

    ~-~-THE END-~-~
  15. ReneeLouvier

    ReneeLouvier Active Member

    ..also if you guys haven't noticed just yet, that apperently is included into the main 4 other stories I think. XD

    I'm gonna post alternate ending though after this post. XD
  16. ReneeLouvier

    ReneeLouvier Active Member

    [Alternate Ending]

    ----------------

    The cemetary was finally being finished with the relocating, and they were unloading some of the coffins back into the ground once more.

    Sadie stood by Richard's new grave, and watched sadly as it was lowered into it's new and final resting place. Scooter and Skeeter stood behind her, watching as well.

    The ground was fresh, and Sadie sighed softly. "I'll always miss you, Richard. I'll never forget you.."

    She gently laid a small bouqet of roses on the grave, then they walked away. The rain started to drizzle a bit more, as they slowly made their way back to the car. She stopped and smiled softly, looking upwards towards the heavens.

    She knew that was Richard...and he was crying with laughter.

    --------------------------

    The sunlight peeked through the curtained window, and it fell upon the bed, warm and delightful. A girl turned away from it, she was sleeping, and she didn't want to be awoken at all.

    "No...Eli...don't kill 'em.....AHHH!!" She yelled, and bolted straight up in her bed. She looked around her, and frowned. "Wait....that...oh my...."

    It was a really bad dream she had had. Just a really weird dream....quite haunting she figured. She then stood up, shaking her head, and got started for her day, that dream rattled around all day.

    [OOC: sorry, just got that crazy ending in my head, but I realized it was SUPER CHEAP, and it won't be included in the print/audio version of it at all.]
  17. G-MAN

    G-MAN Active Member

    Those were some wonderful endings to your story, and I love how you brought Eli back one last time. I don't like to be stepping on Ed's critiquing but it looks like Griff is staying behind with the Muppets, because you just had Biff in the back seat, but a wonderful story anyway
  18. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Don't worry about it G-Man... Just shows that there's someone else paying attention to the details. Nice endings Renee... Though maybe... If you add a few details to wrap up the storyline in the different timelines... Maybe the nightmare you had could serve its purpose.

    For example:
    1 Griff's still with the Muppets in the super future of 2043.
    2 The Denays Corporation is still threatening the town of Hensonville in the future of 2027.
    3 Just what was it that happened on January 7, 1985 that was so central to the story itself?
    All of these are points that need to be addressed to truly finish off the story... Or do you intend to still have the Denays Corporation in 2027 for your next story?
  19. ReneeLouvier

    ReneeLouvier Active Member

    Maybe, But I'm not sure just yet. I will probably re-tool the ending, cause I'm honestly not that happy with it. It's probably because of my seizure-addled brain that I came up with that craptastic ending last night. >>

    Well, that will be addressed in the 6th story, which dosn't have a title yet.
    The different ending may clear some things up once I get around to fixing it.
    In my mind, as Scooter is in his early 20's, I believe he and Skeeter were born on that day. And (even in the stories) Richard died on that day. That day holds great signafiance to the Grosses. Now, yes, Richard actually died IRL the year of 1992, but I'm taking a chunk of artisic-license with it. XD
    Possibly, refer back to #2 for any further questions.

    And....all out shout out: any ideas to be pitched for further story ideas? Unlike the first post of this thread, this story WILL BE INCLUDED in the book, as it is pertinant.
  20. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Under the new overall title of Sadie's Stories Line?
    Sixth book? Yaey, some of us will be happy with that.
    Take your time crafting the ending, I'm sure you can find a suitable resolution.

    Look forward to it.


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