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On Writing Fan Fiction (Discussion)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Redsonga, Sep 13, 2008.

  1. RedPiggy

    RedPiggy Well-Known Member

    LOL ... please don't let Fraggles work for PETA ... I don't think I could handle it :D
  2. Redsonga

    Redsonga Active Member

    Well, I just mean it could show why they don't eat meat, they would never get into any silly creature ideas about it...
    Anyway, I'd rather have it be meat or a waste product than 'Ohno donuts evil! All fat baaad, eat a carrot stick all silly creatures before you diiie!' story-.- It annoyed me in supper size me when I was raised on McyDs once a week since I was little and never got fat or died, and it would annoy me in a fraggle story to:sympathy:
  3. RedPiggy

    RedPiggy Well-Known Member

    Well, it was more in response to your desire not to turn it into a PSA. They were the only group that came to mind for beating messages into your head with a stick. :p
  4. Redsonga

    Redsonga Active Member

    Oh, okay *lol* I just meant, if a good fanfic is going to be made about anything being bad it has to be more gentle than a PSA I think, just to not have readers running for the hills. The series writers were very good at knowing this balance :).
    (And after all, Red being sick from eating silly creature whatsit is nothing like my Lanford idea, they can't just go plant her in better soil *lol*)
  5. bazooka_beak

    bazooka_beak Active Member

    I guess the story isn't really such a hot idea XD I'll put it away for now.
  6. Redsonga

    Redsonga Active Member

    Oh, it's not that bad of an idea...To me, that award goes to a fic I saw once where Red had a scar from being beaten...I dunno, certain things if not done just so :\
  7. Redsonga

    Redsonga Active Member

    I've looked everywhere so I guess there hasn't been:sympathy:.

    Anyway I would keep the The Count in character...at the same time that SST is a show for little ones the characters themselves also have, like, two generations of grown up fans so I think a dark fic might work if it is done out of love...:insatiable:
  8. RedPiggy

    RedPiggy Well-Known Member

    From experience, I can vouch for how fast "dark" makes the crickets chirp. *shrugs* I mean, I wouldn't mind seeing such a fic, but then again, I write things like that all the time.
  9. Redsonga

    Redsonga Active Member

    Oh I know it does, I mean But to fly... is a good example :p, and Rock and Rain did only so-so... But still, they were stories I felt like I had to write.
    I think one or two dark thoughtful (but made out of love) SST fics might just be what the section on FF.net needs, even if they only get one or two reviews. Right now most of them seem to be..odd or written on a hatefilled sugar high:o.
    I mean, it is not like I am going to put any moonlight snuggling scenes in (the stories):p
  10. Redsonga

    Redsonga Active Member

    I am asking this everywhere I write to get everyones ideas:

    In a story that is written all in limited first person how would you go about showing flashbacks as someone is telling them a story? Would it be okay to break into 3rd person just for those times? I know just about everything about writing first person expect for this..And no, I have no plans to ever write it all in 3rd person

    Also, how would you write something like a montage to show the scenes from a certain passage of time? I don't want to dwell on what happens in this certain time period, but I don't want to skip over it as it shows many of the growing connections between the characters...
  11. RedPiggy

    RedPiggy Well-Known Member

    Well, "limited" means just that. The best the main character could do is imagine it. So, in that respect, you could use flashbacks, just introduce them as the main character trying to visualize what the other character is telling them.
  12. Redsonga

    Redsonga Active Member

    But still, if it was a character visualizing, it would flip over to 3rd person wouldn't it? My main character is very vocal in her mind, so it would otherwise have her talking to herself about things, and for this I would rather the scene and the mood just speak for itself. This wouldn't be a common thing...
  13. RedPiggy

    RedPiggy Well-Known Member

    Yeah, in that context, it would go to 3rd person.
  14. Redsonga

    Redsonga Active Member

    Woohoo, I'm not crazy! :excited: I thought that was how the rule worked...
  15. AnimatedC9000

    AnimatedC9000 Well-Known Member

    Hi, everyone. I'm a new fanfic writer with a total of... one story on this site so far. It's a JHH fic called A Robotic Heart, with Digit as the main character and the narrator.

    I have a little problem (besides not knowing the immediate actions of the next chapter). Even though I put a lot of time and effort into the story, it gets very few reviews. How can I get more reviews for my story?
  16. RedPiggy

    RedPiggy Well-Known Member

    The only thing I can think of off-hand is alter your sig to give a brief description (very brief) like "The Story of Digit, Muppet Cyborg" or something like that.
  17. Redsonga

    Redsonga Active Member

    It could be because a lot of us didn't get to see the show he was in. I remember what he looks like but I don't remember ever getting to see the show :(
  18. RedPiggy

    RedPiggy Well-Known Member

    (nods) That makes a lot of sense. That's a problem with cross-overs, as well.
  19. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Well... Bear in mind that every thread posted here, including fanfic stories, have two numbers beneath them. The first is the number of people who've read through the thread, including possible multiple readings by the same person; the second is how many people have replied. But one thing I always say is... So long as the story is one that you as the author want to keep telling, then keep writing/posting. The people who do reply appreciate what's come so far. Hope this helps Cait. :) :cool:
  20. Redsonga

    Redsonga Active Member

    Your fic has ten reviewers :). One of mine only has seven and two of those people aren't members anymore... I think you are doing fine :)


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