TMS outline- Burl Ives!

[Xerus]

Really neat fanfic. I like Burl Ives and his singing. This definitely looks like a great season 1 fanfic.

 

[Gorgon Heap]

One small edit:

In the opening #, "Get Me to the Church on Time" should be in F# Major (which allows the next song to start on the same note the previous one ends on) and not A flat Major (which requires a whole step switch that makes no sense, musically).

David "Gorgon Heap" Ebersole

 

[ZeppoAndFriends]

That was very, very good. You'd make a good writer for a new Muppet Show.