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FanFic: Penguin With A Dream

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Princeton, Mar 12, 2007.

  1. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Oooh... Very good, very good. Loved the transformation of Mr. Lords. Still afraid for Mokey's sake. Please post more when you can.
  2. ReneeLouvier

    ReneeLouvier Active Member

    Good lord. What's going to happen next? This story's going super fast, Brian! I can't wait to read more of it. This is also a good thing to read (it keeps my attention at least) while my Mom is here in the hospital. (Read "The RHLC!" latest postings for more information.)
  3. TogetherAgain

    TogetherAgain Well-Known Member

    There is a lot of good stuff in this story... And lots of people have already said most of it. But one very random thing I wanted to comment on... I love the short chapter style. It's very effective, and I've never been able to be concise enough for it.

    Great stuff, though. More please!
  4. Bill Bubble Guy

    Bill Bubble Guy Active Member

    This is most unusual and very exciting. Please post more soon.

    BTW Sara. Please tell your mother I hope she's feeling better very soon.:sympathy: :)
  5. redBoobergurl

    redBoobergurl Well-Known Member

    Ooh...must read more...keep it coming!
  6. Princeton

    Princeton Active Member

    More will be on the way tomorrow!:excited:
  7. TogetherAgain

    TogetherAgain Well-Known Member

    <Nudge nudge>
  8. Bill Bubble Guy

    Bill Bubble Guy Active Member

    Oh Brian. How I love this story of yours.:D Have you been able to come up with any more of it at all? I do so hope you can finish it. It's been so brilliant so far. :excited:
  9. Princeton

    Princeton Active Member

    Like I said, college has been keeping me very busy; plus, I'm kinda at a road block in the story. I know how I want it to end, but I'm having trouble linking all the characters together for the big show down. But if anyone has any suggestions, feel free to PM me. If I don't hear from anybody by Monday, I'll come up with something myself. All the same, though, I'd really love to hear what you all have to say.
  10. Princeton

    Princeton Active Member

    Part 19

    "Where'd he go?" asked Gobo.

    "I don't know, but if he thinks he's gonna get away from us, he's got another think coming!" exclaimed Chamberlain.

    "Uh, guys? The scorpion?" said Lightning. Even though Chamberlain was in a frightful rage, he laughed gently to himself and flipped the scorpion into his backpack with his sabre. "Good enough" responded Lightning.

    "Now, I couldn't be sure, but I have a feeling that Lords and his cronies have kidnapped Mokey and Lindy and they're somewhere on the high seas. Gobo, do you have anything that can get us to them?" asked Chamberlain.

    "Well, I have an old speedboat in the garage..." started Gobo.

    "Perfect! Gogbo, if you'll just get that ready for us, we'll soon be on our way" said Chamberlain as he grabbed his sabre and backpack
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    Back at Johnny Fiama's office, Sal was trying his darndest to find out the whereabouts of Lindy. He was jabbering into a walkie talkie and typing away on a computer database while Johnny was pacing the floor.

    "How ya doing over there, Sal?" inquired Johnny.

    "Not too good, Johnny; nobody's heard anything!" replied Sal. Just then, Fozzie burst into the office.

    "Mr. Fiama, Mr. Fiama, you've gotta help me! My name's Fozzie Bear; I'm a pilot but I don't have my jet with me right now and it's a matter of life and death, so can I please use yours?" rambled Fozzie.

    "Sure thing, kid, but first tell me what the problem is" replied Johnny.

    "Well, I'm in the same party as Lindy and there's a real bad man after us and I've gotta save them before it's too late" said Fozzie.

    "Lindy? You mean the penguin?" asked Johnny.

    "One and the same; why?" said Fozzie.

    "Because he won the talent show! That's why we've been looking for him: to give him his prize money!" replied Johnny.

    "Oh! Well, in that case, you can give it to me and I'll give it to Lindy when I see him. So, can I use your jet?" asked Fozzie.

    Johnny handed him the envelope with the money in it and said "Sal, show this bear where my jet is. Oh, and Fozzie... good luck."
  11. redBoobergurl

    redBoobergurl Well-Known Member

    Woo-hoo! Update! And it's Fozzie to the rescue! Hurry Fozzie, go get those Fraggles, human and penguin!
  12. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Very nice. Thanks for the update. If we can help in any way, let us know... And please vote for Piggy, we need the votes to get rid of Bunsen!
  13. Bill Bubble Guy

    Bill Bubble Guy Active Member

    Cool update Brian. You're doing really swell with this epic fan fic. And I second Ed. Please vote for Piggy.
  14. Princeton

    Princeton Active Member

    Part 20 (The Final Part)

    As Chamberlain, Lightning, and Gobo set out on their speedboat to find Mr. Lords' boat, a storm started to brew. The wind was blowing their little boat out of their control and it even disconnected the motor! "Gobo, do you have an oar?" shouted Chamberlain through the roar of the storm. It really made no difference since the waves were doing most of the steering anyway. Things certainly looked bad for the trio when a massive wave formed underneath the speedboat and propeled it through the aft lounge of Mr. Lords' boat. Naturally, everyone inside the aft lounge (Mokey, Lindy, Scoop, and Jasper) spilled out into the ocean.

    As Chamberlain tried to grab Lindy and Mokey, Jasper opened Chamberlain's backpack and the scorpion materialized into Mr. Lords! He grabbed Jasper and pushed his head underwater, yelling "This is YOUR fault, you doddering moron!". Meanwhile, Scoop and Chamberlain were each tugging on Mokey and Lindy, while the storm formed a whirlpool effect in the water. No matter how hard Scoop tugged, the whirlpool sucked him in with so much force that he had to let go. When Mr. Lords saw Scoop fall victim to the whirlpool, he lunged at Chamberlain, but in turn he and Jasper were sucked in too. Just then, Fozzie navigated the nose of Johnny Fiama's jet right to the spot where the gang was bobbing and flailing in the water. He released the side door so they all climb in. At last, everyone was safe and back together again!
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    Fozzie mentioned the prize momey to everyone. Naturally, they were all excited, but knew that they would have to think about how to spend it. Mokey and Gobo looked out the jet's window and, even though the clouds, they could hear an echoing sound from the earth below. Though faint, they could make out only this:

    "I say, one, two, play me do
    Let me sound as sweet as you
    Play me high, play me long
    Let me be your song"

    "Does anyone else hear that?" asked Mokey.

    "Faintly, yes... why?" replied Chamberlain.

    "It's coming from the Rock! Fozzie, follow that sound!" exclaimed Mokey excitedly.
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    On the spot where the old man's house once stood, the entrance to the Rock was still alive. Fozzie landed the plane and let everybody out. Gobo raced torwards the entrane and yelled "Meet you inside, Mokey!".

    Mokey started, "Guys, I never would've guessed how hard it would be to say goodbye to you, but the Rock is my home; it's the only place where I'm truly happy. But you know I love all of you, too. Goodbye, Lightning and Fozzie". She turned to Chamberlain and said "Goodbye, Chamberlain. I never would've had the will to carry on if it hadn't been for you. I'll never forget you. And I'd like Lindy to live with you, if you wouldn't mind"

    "Mind? Well, of course I wouldn't mind! Anything for you, Mokey" said Chamberlain.

    Mokey then turned to Lindy and gave him a big hug and said "Lindy, you were my best friend. You were there for me no matter what, through good times and the bad. How can I ever thank you for that?"

    "Aw, well, Mokey, I'll miss you too, but I just want you to be happy, so go. Go live where you belong." replied Lindy.

    Mokey turned towards the entrance and looked over her shoulder at all her friends and walked inside to the Rock.

    "Well, no sense standing around here moping. Let's get back on the plane; Fozzie, you may take us to my summer home in Newport." said Chamberlain. He gathered up Lindy and Lightning and said "Remember, boys, you can never leave the magic" and got back on the plane.

    THE END
  15. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Yaey! Vonderful ending! And Gobo and Mokey are back in the rock. Rully excited should there be any attempt at a sequel. Thanks for the story Brian.
  16. redBoobergurl

    redBoobergurl Well-Known Member

    Aww, very nice ending. So glad everyone is safe and sound. Very glad Mokey and Gobo are going back to the rock. I also like that Lindy is going to live with Chamberlain. Very nice story indeed!
  17. Bill Bubble Guy

    Bill Bubble Guy Active Member

    Very exciting story Brian. I hope a sequel is in mind.


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