1. Welcome to the Muppet Central Forum!
    You are viewing our forum as a guest. Join our free community to post topics and start private conversations. Please contact us if you need help with registration or your account login.

  2. Sesame Street Season 47
    Sesame Street's 47th season officially began Saturday January 7 on HBO. After you see the new episodes, post here and let us know your thoughts.

Pre-Wedding Jitters ~ A Series of Short Muppet Fan-Fiction Stories

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by theprawncracker, Apr 24, 2008.

  1. Leyla

    Leyla Member

    I am told by a higher authority, namely, my beloved mentor, that this chapter simply must have a detailed review... and so I read it... and I completely concur.

    And so, we go...

    Okay first off, I really enjoyed the image of dear Kermit falling asleep on the table, doing the finances. He's a trooper, and works so hard, because of course, he loves them, and it's his Dream, first and foremost. It's a little thing, but little things are what make characters really come alive. That the Muppets have so many little quirks, along with their big ones, is why they're so fascinating and rich. (Although, they are often poor.) And the Matrix ref made me smile.

    Oh, I know the feeling, Kermit!

    <laughs> Ogled, now THAT was a great word choice, and I am very pleased indeed with the frog. I love the love, and I love the interest he's showing in her. He ought to have both, marrying her!

    Person who is a pig! Love the helpless lean. I can practically see the swooning posture, the delicate flutter of the eyelids. Nice ensemble choice, Piggy, and nice alliteration Prawnie! Oh, and very very nice set up... hits me, in retrospect, like a ton of bricks.

    <laughs> Oh, GREAT line! I'm sure he WILL, PIggy!

    Oh, perfect, perfect! Kermit is SUCH a great match for Piggy. So much her equal, and it's so easily forgotten that he can give right back what he gets. Love the pun... and love that he's lucky not to trip over himself. Very impressive, Prawnie dear.

    Fabulous PIggy line.

    Oh, so much to say here... Not literally, surprisingly... love it! And that, exhausted as he is, he does go with her, especially considering what he thinks she's thinking about! Kermit may protest... but he's following her anyway! Also, as an old-fashioned girl among old fashioned girls... <applauds the frog and the pig heartily>.

    <amused> There's a lot of affection, I think, in that "dumb frog" and it's certainly a lighthearted approach to... a striking conversation.

    Well, I wouldn't recommend broadcasting it to Big Bird. Now THAT would be a discussion... sheesh.
    <laughs> Love seeing Piggy kid him, love the Fozzie line, and on top of that, this whole scene... very artfully and delicately done, Prawnie. I'm totally impressed by your handling it!

    No, the skeletons are in the closet. Not surprised that the frog keeps a sharp eye out for things out of place.

    She has a secret SAFE! WOW! <giggles> I am SOO amused and delighted by that.

    And the award for best portray of subtle frog jealousy goes to...
    I can't argue with that either! But for different reasons!

    Oh, too funny... but don't we ALL want to know now? Maybe she doesn't trust the banks... and considering that frog joke, can't blame her for that.

    Big deep breath moment here, Prawnie... and the skill in this is REALLY impressive.

    Wow, Prawnie... very... subtle, and touching, and really, having a major impact on me. Piggy's very close to my heart... surprise surprise! and so is her childhood, which I have my own theories about. I can't tell you how impressed I am at your broaching this,
    and doing it in such a sensitive way.

    REally touching... elegantly, and simply done. Well done, Prawnie, really.

    And all of a sudden, I really believe in this wedding. I mean, don't get me wrong, I was always completely in favour of it... but there's a lot more deep rooted sincerity in their love in this scene than there is in all of MAP, which was very fun and I really enjoyed it. I was not expecting anything so... solemn and true in your writing this Prawnie, and it surprised me. I'm touched, and very impressed.

    <shiver> I've imagined, Kermit. this scene makes me love Kermit even more. He'll be a good husband to her.

    Oh wow... I am just so touched by this, and so excited for their wedding! Now I know they'll have a real marriage in this series.

    Prawnie? I love you. thank you EVER so much for this scene.

    Wedding march! HA! Beautiful! Oh, we ALL knows he loves it... and he admits to it...Love it!

    Yup, they're gonna have a real marriage. Bruises and all!

    <laughs> Oh, Kermit... you must be careful about joking with her when you're in arms reach, and Piggy... about taking jokes... remember what you told Kermit earlier?

    YIPPPEEEE! Can't WAIT! Hurry up and start the next one, Prawnie!
    She sure does still got it... and in fact, I'm quite sure, after that display of emotion and vulnerability earlier, that Piggy needed to show it off a bit... more for herself that to convince the frog. She doesn't let her guard down easily or often, our Piggy girl. Love that fire in the belly!

    LOVELY job Prawnie! Well and truly!
     
  2. Muppetfan44

    Muppetfan44 Active Member

    Great Story!

    Ooh, what a fantastic story! I cannot wait for the wedding, I am so excited! I know it's going to be great! Great job! Can't wait for the next installment!:)
     
  3. redBoobergurl

    redBoobergurl Well-Known Member

    Wow, Prawnie this was quite an ending! I'm so excited for their wedding and I love the touching exchange between Kermit and Piggy and her secret about her past and it's just so good! I can't wait for the next installment, so you should get on it! :)
     


Share This Page