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Once Upon My Heart.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by green stuff, Aug 8, 2006.

  1. green stuff

    green stuff Member

    Again, this is just the first part of the chapter. I'll have the rest up and running ASAP. As for now , I hope everone likes this.
  2. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Whoa... That was... Well, it was.
    You might want to take care of a few spelling errors here and there...

    And though I'm a bit reluctant to warm up to the ushygushies... The way it was developed in this chapter absolutely made me thrill to every little detail and show of chivalry from Robin towards Megan.
    Simpy superb. Something troubles me though, this confrontation Megan dreads back at her home. There are a few conclusions I could make, but won't out of fear and respect for you, the author.
    Great stuff greenstuff... A wonderful addition and it was the kind of romantic writing I could come back to love each time I read it.
    Hoping for more soonerishkibbible.
  3. TogetherAgain

    TogetherAgain Well-Known Member

    WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! ...Call me biased, but I just adore teenage-Robin... And his chivalry, and that he's GENEROUS in his tips (both of my sisters are waitresses...) All lovely!

    MORE PLEASE!
  4. green stuff

    green stuff Member

    Hey guys..yeah sorry for the typos, I only noticed that after I had actually already post it! EE! Sorry guys. Oh, and Count- yeah don't worry. Conclude away, even if you want to PM me, that's fine. More coming as soon as I can!
  5. green stuff

    green stuff Member

    and Count and TogetherAgain, thanks for your kind words! I try really hard to make Robin vibrant and charming as a teenager, so it's good to know that i'm doing a semi good job!
  6. green stuff

    green stuff Member

    Hey...guys! Guess What? My dad finally got a new computer, so now I can post way more often!! Yaay!
  7. TogetherAgain

    TogetherAgain Well-Known Member

    YAAAAAAAAAAY!

    You do know that means we just might nag more, don't you?

    MORE PLEASE!
  8. green stuff

    green stuff Member

    I'm working on it, Lisa :) I'm waaaay ahead of ya.
  9. TogetherAgain

    TogetherAgain Well-Known Member

    <Grins> Excellent.
  10. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    And you do know that means you can use your thread, not to mention the threads of others' stories to nag them for more right?
    That means you Lisa... Looking for more of Heart of Gold, along with those other two somewhat neglected fanfics.
    Oh, and before I forget... Post more Nicee!
  11. green stuff

    green stuff Member

    Overwhelmed was a word not even beginning to describe young Braden at this moment. They had been at this department store for hours, and Braden was now starting to feel a little more than a simple rumble in the jungle. Nonetheless, he wanted the girls to be happy and enjoy their time together, and so he suffered in silence. (though somehow he wished there was a sandwich shop nearby.) He stood there in a rather aloof state of mind, holding out his hands for every bag or box the girls pushed into his arms. It was only when the stack of frilly dresses and pink lingerie started to block his vision that he even said anything at all.

    ''Um, ok girls, don't you think this is enough? I mean- we do want to leave things in here for other women to buy, right?''

    His only response was a giggle from Piggy and Samantha. How simple he was, they thought. After the fact,Samantha took pity on her husband-somewhat. She lifted some of the clothes into her own arms so that the two of them could see each other, and kissed him softly.

    ''We're almost done, sweetie. I promise.''
    ''That's what you said almost two hours ago,'' he said with a wrinkled frown.

    ''But I mean it this time,'' Samantha promised with a child-like grin.
    'And then we can go to dinner, promise.''
    ''Oh good, because I'm starving,'' Braden said, perking up a little.

    He searched for a cart or carrying device of some sort, while Piggy whispered something in Samantha's ear. It was, in fact, something nice. Something thoughtful. Something sneaky. Something delightful. Something that would wreck all....

    ''That's a great idea!'' Samantha gasped. ''I haven't seen it since you remodeled! Honey, why don't we drop by Piggy's for dinner tonight?''

    ''No sweetheart, not tonight,'' he yawned while coming back with a cart. ''I've taken the night off. Besides, I'm a little tired, and I-''

    ''Kermit will be there,'' Samantha siaid warmly. Samantha nudged him in the ribs jokingly after saying this. Luckily though, this was all Braden needed to hear to convince him.

    ''I'm there,'' he said, heaving a sigh- half of relief and half of frustration.
    '' 'Cause let me tell you- as much as I loved being with you and Piggy, I was a phone call away from finding the nearest sports bar.''

    Piggy and Samantha giggled as Braden brushed back his raven colored bangs from his forehead. To sum up what he was feeling in three words: comfort and joy. He was going to get to hang out with another guy- well, another male, anyway. Another married male at that, which made the situation all the better.

    ''Surely we're not that bad, darling,'' Piggy said with a faux sympathetic look. Braden's only response was a glance in the ladies' direction that said, ' Oh, I beg to differ.'

    ''Just think,'' said Samantha, joining in on the fun. ''If you can't handle this, what on Earth are you gonna do when we have daughters?''
    ''Daughters??'' Hello Mr. Floor, Hello Braden's jaw. BONK.

    ''C'mon,'' giggled Piggy. ''Let's get him home before we scare him to death.''

    ...........................................................................................................

    Meanwhile, Robin had just pulled up into Megan's driveway. He was trying his best to hide the fact that he was blushing, mostly because he was sitting pretty close to her-which made him quite nervous. He did his absolute best to hide this, though, however badly he did.
    ''Well, uh, here we are,'' Robin said through a frazzled voice.
    The sound of this voice made Megan giggle like a four-year old girl who just saw her father blow bubbles in his milk. He sounded absolutely ridiculous trying to impress her. Ridiculous, yet cute.

    ''Well, yeah, here we are,'' she said slowly. ''my house.'' The two young frogs simply smiled at each other, wondering who was going to be the one to speak next. Unfortunatley, nobody got that chance. The moment was broken by the sound of heavy footsteps just inside the house. Robin looked at Megan in awe, and she only only looked towards the house. She narrowed her eyes, focusing harder on the sound with every second. She listened harder still and more intently to the the footsteps for the next few seconds, then finally felt herself exhale when she saw the last lamp go off in the house. 'I'm safe tonight,' she thought.

    Robin, however, had no idea what she was thinking. But he knew it was something that hurt her. To show her that he was there to support her, he placed a cold hand on top of hers. Even though he didn't know for sure what was going through her mind, it was almost as if he could read her inner thoughts; like he could know what she was thinking before she even thought it. Yes, Robin had a certain magic of his own. If only he knew how to use it..

    ''You're safe now. Don't even worry about him. You'll be ok.''
    ''I know.'' silence. ''Robin,''
    ''Megan,''
    ''Thanks for the ride home.''
    ''I like you.''
    Both spoke simultaneously, so neither one heard the other. Not even when they said their pieces a second time. No big problem for Megan- big problem for Robin.
  12. green stuff

    green stuff Member

    Ok, yeah sorry to leave you guys hanging like this, but my mum came in and saw I wasn't doing my homework....yeah. So, I'm going to continue as soon as I can. Til then, (and I haven't even gotten to the great part yet...:( ) enjoy...i guess...
  13. TogetherAgain

    TogetherAgain Well-Known Member

    <Giggles!> Oh, I do SO adore that last scene! So curious as to what worries Megan so much at home, so sympathetic with that rotten mess called the teenage dating scene, and SO excited about the build up to what's going to hapen when Piggy, Samantha, and Braden get to the frog-and-pig's house!

    MORE PLEASE!

    Edit: Ah, I know how that goes. Good luck with the homework, green stuff!
  14. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Trust me Lisa, it's something that even you're not ready for, something that'll take all the teddy bears in your bin and then some. But I'm not saying anything, keeping my lip zipped.
    Nice... This was a good addition, we get to see what's happening with Samantha and Piggy at their shopping spree. And have I told you I'm falling in love with Megan? Well, not literally, I know she's a fictional character and a frog to boot... And she's rully meant to be with Robin... But she's one of my new favorites. Will wait for this part of the story to finish before asking what happened to the othe new Muppet immigrants. But to echothose crazy kitten daughters or is it daughter or is it, eh, who cares, of mine... More please!
  15. green stuff

    green stuff Member

    Count, thanks so much! I'm really glad that you like Megan so much. Oh, and thank you for keeping your lip zipped about the secret. And Lisa--thanks for your compliments! But yes, take what the Count says to heart about this one, because when you read what has Megan so worried, it's going to be, well it's going to be sad. Oh, and just a little warning, you two: Count, you said that you thought Megan was meant to be with Robin...well, was she? That's all I'm going to say about that. As for Penny and Zhen-Yi, it's all about them, well mostly about them in the next chapter. But first, we need to see what's going to happen with the party here in America. But, rest assured, I will try my best to get the rest of the chapter up tonight, so I won't have to keep posting in installments like this. I don't think I'm gonna have any homework tonight, so I should be able to use the computer. Til then, c ya!
  16. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Well... If she isn't, I happen to have a spot for her in the castle, with your permission of course. Though I'd talk to you when I reach that point, should I ever reach that point. We'll see, and I look forard tomore story whenever it gets posted.
    Gonzo: You called?
    No, I said whenever, not whatever.
    Gonzo: You just called me just now.
    Whatever...
    Gonzo: Yes?
    Skip it.
    Devo Muppets: He said "skip it!" When a problem comes along... You must skip it...
  17. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Hmmm... Wondering if we'll get an update to this fabu fanfic soon.
  18. green stuff

    green stuff Member

    Why Count, is that you asking for more fanific? I'm on it!
  19. The Count

    The Count Moderator Staff Member

    Yes... Please forgive the zaniness in the previous post... The message got a bit garbled, but yes. Asking for more story please!
  20. green stuff

    green stuff Member

    Hello, all!
    This is somewhat of a--a warning, I guess. I'm going to post more story super soon, and it's going to be a lot to read, just so you know. I'm not sure what day I'll actually end up posting this, but I can promise you this: it'll be up before the week is out. My goal is to get it up before Wednesday, but I can make no promises there. So, when I post again, be prepared to read...a lot....this is why it's taken me so long to post again..it's a big one, I'll tell ya that. til then, cheers!

    green stuff


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