So are we going back to this thread, or should i post it in the new outline thread?* By the way, that was great, although if there is no song in the last segmant of the show, it would be a Closing Sketch. also, try to elimanate the hyperlink on the Tommy Flanagan, The Pathological Liar part. you just edit, highlight it, and hit the botton with the black oval-ish thing with a red X through it. *Edit: Nevermind, i didn't see that you combined the two threads. great stuff.